工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且略显复杂，建议简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: I used to work as a biological research assistant. Now, I am a student at Hong Kong Baptist University, majoring in the Discovery and Modernization of Chinese Traditional Medicine.

建議: 回答中存在语法和发音错误，且信息表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子，准确表达工作单位和地点。

範例: I used to work as a biological researcher at the Shinji Institute, part of the Chinese Academy of Sciences in Guangdong province, southern China.

建議: 回答中有发音错误，且句子结构简单。建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然和具体。

範例: Of course, I enjoyed working there because the environment was very professional and inspiring, which motivated me to do my best.

建議: 回答重复之前内容，缺乏新信息。建议提供更多细节或个人感受，避免重复。

範例: Yes, I liked working there because the professional and inspiring environment helped me grow both personally and professionally.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议使用简单明了的句子，清楚表达未来计划。

範例: I am interested in combining traditional knowledge with modern science, so I plan to work in a related field after graduation.

× I used to be a biological researchers season at Shinji Institu all for the vast technology Chinese Academy of Science, which is located in Guangdong province in the South of China.

✓ I used to be a biological research assistant at Shinji Institute of Advanced Technology, Chinese Academy of Sciences, which is located in Guangdong province in the South of China.

这里的“researchers”是复数形式，但主语是单数“a biological research assistant”，应使用单数形式“research assistant”。另外，原句中“season”应为“assistant”，且机构名称拼写错误，应改正。

× I used to be a biological researchers season at Shinji Institu all for the vast technology Chinese Academy of Science, which is located in Guangdong province in the South of China.

✓ I used to be a biological research assistant at Shinji Institute of Advanced Technology, Chinese Academy of Sciences, which is located in Guangdong province in the South of China.

介词“for”用错了，正确表达应为“at”表示在某机构工作。

× Of cross I enjoyed working there becaused the environment is very professional an inspiring.

✓ Of course, I enjoyed working there because the environment is very professional and inspiring.

“Of cross”应为“Of course”，是固定短语；“becaused”应为“because”；“an inspiring”应为“and inspiring”，连接两个形容词时用“and”。

× Yes, I enjoyed working there because the environment is very professional an inspiring.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed working there because the environment is very professional and inspiring.

“an inspiring”应为“and inspiring”，连接两个形容词时用“and”。

× I am very interested in combining traditional knowledge with modern science, so I will go in to do some thing relating with him.

✓ I am very interested in combining traditional knowledge with modern science, so I will go on to do something related to it.

“go in to”应为“go on to”，表示继续做某事；“some thing”应合并为“something”；“relating with him”应为“related to it”，表达与某事相关。