工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời dùng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng những từ không đúng hoặc không rõ nghĩa như "informed of promoting product" hay "Chatterjee". Hãy cố gắng trả lời trong khoảng 3-5 câu, sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I'm currently working in the marketing field. I promote products for a large company located in the city. My job is both challenging and exciting because I enjoy learning new strategies to attract customers and increase sales.

建議: Bạn cần trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung chi tiết. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I work for a technology company located in the city center. The company specializes in software development. I really enjoy the dynamic work environment there.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến của mình một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể, tránh những từ không rõ nghĩa như "brake mod into rebels" hay "will reappear".

範例: I think it is a good place to work because they provide many facilities for employees, such as comfortable seating and a clean working environment. They also offer snacks and meals during breaks. Overall, the company cares about the well-being of its staff.

建議: Bạn cần trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung chi tiết. Tránh những từ không rõ nghĩa như "For Symbol, having attorneys was my mic" và cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I really like the place where I work because it is very clean and well organized. The comfortable environment helps me feel happy and motivated during working hours. For example, having a quiet space makes it easier for me to focus on my tasks.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về kế hoạch tương lai của mình. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh những từ không rõ nghĩa hoặc sai chính tả.

範例: I have thought about my future career for a long time. I want to specialize in marketing because I am interested in this field. After that, I hope to become a university lecturer to share my knowledge with students.

× My job informed of promoting product for the big company located in the city would make my world but challenging and exciting.

✓ My job involves promoting products for a big company located in the city, which makes my world both challenging and exciting.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'informed of promoting' which is not a correct verb form here. The correct phrase is 'involves promoting' to indicate the job's duties. Also, 'product' should be plural 'products' to match the context. 'Would make my world but challenging and exciting' is awkward; it should be 'makes my world both challenging and exciting' to express the idea clearly.

× I enjoy learning new Chatterjee to attract customers and improve sales.

✓ I enjoy learning new strategies to attract customers and improve sales.

The word 'Chatterjee' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. It should be replaced with 'strategies' or a similar noun that fits the context. This is an incorrect use of vocabulary, which falls under adjective/adverb misuse as it affects sentence meaning.

× I work for that company located in the interest 100 Men City is a technology is form that specialize in the software development SAN.

✓ I work for a company located in Internet 100 Men City, which is a technology firm that specializes in software development.

The original sentence has multiple errors including 'interest' instead of 'Internet', 'is form' instead of 'firm', and 'specialize' instead of 'specializes'. Prepositions and verb forms are incorrect. 'Located in the interest' should be 'located in Internet'. Also, 'specialize' should be 'specializes' to agree with singular subject 'firm'.

× I really enjoy in dynamic work environment there.

✓ I really enjoy the dynamic work environment there.

The verb 'enjoy' does not require the preposition 'in'. The correct form is 'enjoy the dynamic work environment'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'dynamic work environment'.

× For me it is a good place to work because they provide many facilities for the employers so there's a comfort table setting, an clean working environment.

✓ For me, it is a good place to work because they provide many facilities for the employees, such as comfortable seating and a clean working environment.

'Employers' is incorrect here; it should be 'employees' meaning the workers. 'Comfort table setting' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable seating'. Also, 'an clean' should be 'a clean' because 'clean' starts with a consonant sound. These are quantifier and article errors.

× They also offer of 30s upper snack and meal with the brake mod into rebels.

✓ They also offer snacks and meals during breaks and provide refreshments.

The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors. 'Offer of 30s upper snack and meal' is incorrect; it should be 'offer snacks and meals'. 'Brake mod into rebels' is likely a mishearing or typo and should be 'during breaks and provide refreshments'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and vocabulary.

× Overall the company care about the well-being of the staff and they will reappear.

✓ Overall, the company cares about the well-being of the staff and they will support them.

'Company' is singular, so the verb should be 'cares' not 'care' (subject-verb agreement). 'They will reappear' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended to say 'they will support them' or 'they will take care of them'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb agreement.

× Yes I I really like the place where I work because it says a very clean and well organized the environment is comfortable will help me feel happy and motivated during the working hour.

✓ Yes, I really like the place where I work because it is very clean and well organized. The environment is comfortable and helps me feel happy and motivated during working hours.

'It says a very clean' is incorrect; it should be 'it is very clean'. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity. 'Will help' should be 'helps' to match present tense. 'Working hour' should be plural 'working hours'. These are errors in pronoun use, sentence structure, and tense.

× For Symbol, having attorneys was my mic is easier for me to focus on my task.

✓ For example, having assistants makes it easier for me to focus on my tasks.

The original sentence contains many errors: 'Symbol' should be 'example', 'attorneys' likely means 'assistants', 'was my mic' is unclear and should be 'makes it'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks'. This is incorrect use of pronouns and vocabulary.

× I have learned my future career for a long times.

✓ I have planned my future career for a long time.

'Have learned' is incorrect in this context; 'have planned' or 'have thought about' is more appropriate. 'For a long times' should be 'for a long time' (singular). This is a past tense and quantifier error.

× I want to for sure.

✓ I want to, for sure.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding a comma clarifies the expression. The phrase 'for sure' is an adverbial phrase and should be separated by commas. This is a modal verb usage and sentence structure issue.

× I mastery raised in marketing because I am interesting in this view.

✓ I want to master marketing because I am interested in this field.

'Mastery raised' is incorrect; it should be 'want to master'. 'Interesting' should be 'interested' to describe the speaker's feeling. 'View' should be 'field' or 'area'. This is incorrect use of adjectives and verbs.

× After that I have to become an university letters integra tude about a pocket.

✓ After that, I want to become a university lecturer and study about a subject.

The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors: 'have to' should be 'want to' to express intention, 'an university' should be 'a university' (article error), 'letters integra tude' likely means 'lecturer and study', 'about a pocket' is unclear and likely 'about a subject'. This is incorrect use of pronouns, articles, and vocabulary.