聚会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免语法错误，如"who hangs it"应为"who hosts it"，并且句子应更简洁自然。可以使用连接词使表达更连贯，如"because"。

示例: I like parties depending on who hosts them because if it's with my close friends, I feel relaxed and enjoy myself. However, I feel nervous at parties with strangers.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不清晰。应直接回答问题并用连接词组织句子，避免重复。

示例: As an introverted person, I rarely attended parties when I was a kid. Maybe two or three times a year, usually for my friends' birthday celebrations.

建议: 回答不完整，句子未结束。应完整表达观点，避免口头语过多，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Actually, I have never organized a party because I am introverted and have only a few close friends. I prefer small gatherings instead.

× Umm, it depends on who hangs it.

✓ Umm, it depends on who is hosting it.

这里动词hang用法不正确，应该用动词host的进行时态形式来表达“谁举办”。hang通常表示悬挂，不适合描述举办派对。建议使用host来表达举办的意思。

× if it's party for my friends, my close friends, I will feel relaxed and enjoyable.

✓ if it's a party for my friends, my close friends, I will feel relaxed and enjoy it.

party前缺少冠词a，party是可数名词，单数时需要冠词。enjoyable是形容词，表达感受时应使用动词enjoy。

× However if the party with stranger and I will feel nervous.

✓ However, if the party is with strangers, I will feel nervous.

句子缺少谓语动词is，stranger应为复数形式strangers，且and连接不当，应改为if引导条件状语从句。

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

party应使用复数形式parties，因为这里指的是频率问题，通常用复数。

× I seldom to join in to the party

✓ I seldom join parties

seldom后不加to，join后不加in to，join直接加宾语即可。

× my friends who has their birthday to celebrate their birthday and I would go to.

✓ my friends who have their birthdays to celebrate, and I would go.

friends是复数，谓语动词应为have，birthday应为复数birthdays，句尾的go to不完整，应去掉to。

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

同上，party应为复数形式parties。

× I never organize a party and I prefer to umm.

✓ I have never organized a party and I prefer to...

never organize应使用现在完成时have never organized，表示到目前为止从未做过。prefer后面应接动词不定式或省略内容。