聚会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say "I often have parties with my friends because it's a great way to meet old friends and enjoy ourselves, which gives us energy."

示例: Yes, I enjoy parties. I often have them with my friends because it's a great way to meet old friends and have fun, which really energizes us.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly, using correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, "I rarely had parties as a kid because my parents did not allow me to attend many parties."

示例: I rarely had parties when I was a kid because my parents didn't allow me to go to many parties.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by using better linking words and correcting grammar. Also, avoid repetition. For example, "Yes, I once organized a party. First, I decided on a theme, and everyone had to dress accordingly. I also decorated the hall to match the theme's colours."

示例: Yes, I once organized a party. First, I chose a theme, and everyone had to dress according to it. I also decorated the hall with colours matching the theme.

× I often do party with my friends and it's the time when we met our old friends and I, we enjoyed the parties very much and it give us energy.

✓ I often have parties with my friends and it's the time when we meet our old friends and we enjoy the parties very much and they give us energy.

The word 'party' should be plural 'parties' because it refers to multiple occasions. Also, 'give' should be 'give' to agree with the plural subject 'parties'. The verb 'met' should be 'meet' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I often do party with my friends and it's the time when we met our old friends and I, we enjoyed the parties very much and it give us energy.

✓ I often have parties with my friends and it's the time when we meet our old friends and we enjoy the parties very much and they give us energy.

The verb 'met' is in past tense but the sentence context is present tense, so it should be 'meet'. Similarly, 'enjoyed' should be 'enjoy' to maintain present tense.

× it give us energy.

✓ they give us energy.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'parties', which is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'they'.

× Hopefully I did not have a party when I was a kid because I at that time parents were not allowed to kids to four parties.

✓ Hopefully I did not have a party when I was a kid because at that time parents did not allow kids to go to parties.

The phrase 'were not allowed to kids to four parties' is incorrect. The correct past tense form is 'did not allow kids to go to parties'. Also, 'four' is a mishearing or typo for 'for' or 'go to'.

× So. We are not have.

✓ So, we did not have any.

The phrase 'We are not have' is grammatically incorrect. The correct past tense negative form is 'We did not have any'.

× Everyone have to get ready according to this theme.

✓ Everyone has to get ready according to this theme.

The subject 'Everyone' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'.

× I I organized everything according to the theme.

✓ I organized everything according to the theme.

The repeated 'I' is a redundancy and should be removed.

× Even I decorated the hall according to the theme color.

✓ Even I decorated the hall according to the theme colours.

'Colour' should be plural 'colours' to match the context of multiple theme colours or 'theme colour' if singular. Depending on intended meaning, plural is more common.