聚会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence incomplete. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke complete korte, ar linking words use korte jate answer ta natural ar logical hoy. Apni aro specific details dite paren, jemon keno apni parties pochondo koren na, ba apnar alone time kemon hoy.

示例: I don't usually like parties because I feel uncomfortable in large groups. However, I enjoy small gatherings with close friends because they are more relaxed. Therefore, I prefer staying at home in my pajamas and spending time alone to recharge.

建议: Apnar uttor e onek incomplete sentence ache, ar apni proshner shathe direct answer den nai. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor direct dite, ar supporting details dite linking words use kore. Specific example dite paren, jemon kon type party chhilen, ba kake niye party chhilo.

示例: Honestly, I don't remember having many parties as a kid. But if I did, they were probably small celebrations with my close friends. For example, I might have had a birthday party with my classmates.

建议: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu sentence structure ar linking words improve kora dorkar. Apni aro specific details dite paren, jemon kon type party organize korte paren, ba keno apni organize korte bhalo pan na. Apnar last sentence ta onek informal, seta ke aro formal ar natural korte paren.

示例: No, I have never organized a party because I don't feel confident in planning events. However, I enjoy attending parties with my close friends and family. I appreciate these moments because life is unpredictable, so it's important to cherish time with loved ones.

× except it is with my homies or someone whom I really close with.

✓ except when it is with my homies or someone whom I am really close to.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used at the end of the sentence. The correct preposition to use with 'close' is 'to'. Also, 'except it is' should be 'except when it is' to indicate the condition properly.

× I'm really not into this kind of things.

✓ I'm really not into these kinds of things.

'Kind' should be plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple things, and 'this' should be 'these' to agree with the plural noun 'kinds'.

× I prefer stay at home with my pajamas and.

✓ I prefer to stay at home in my pajamas.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to stay'. Also, 'with my pajamas and' is incomplete and awkward; 'in my pajamas' is the correct phrase.

× With my alone time and I really.

✓ I really enjoy my alone time.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. The corrected sentence completes the thought properly.

× There's a very interesting question, but.

✓ That's a very interesting question.

The phrase 'There's a very interesting question, but.' is incomplete and awkward. 'That's a very interesting question.' is a more natural response.

× Particularly when.

✓ I don't remember particularly when.

The phrase 'Particularly when.' is incomplete. Adding 'I don't remember' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× I heard a party but.

✓ I heard about a party, but...

The phrase is incomplete and awkward. 'I heard about a party, but...' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× But if I had a party then I am sure it's with my friends or.

✓ But if I had a party, then I am sure it was with my friends.

The sentence is incomplete and mixes tenses. 'Had' is past tense, so 'am sure' should be 'was sure' or 'I am sure it was'. Also, the sentence should end properly.

× Whenever I had a party, I am really enjoying that because you never know when you die.

✓ Whenever I had a party, I really enjoyed it because you never know when you will die.

The past tense 'had' requires the past tense 'enjoyed' to maintain consistency. Also, 'you never know when you die' should be 'you never know when you will die' to express future uncertainty.