历史— Part 1 评分报告

建议: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਿਆਕਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕ-ਰਚਨਾ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ ਜੋ ਸਵਾਲ ਦੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਕੁਦਰਤੀ ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਪ੍ਰਭਾਵਿਤ ਕਰਦੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਬਣਾਉਣ ਲਈ, ਸਿਰਫ਼ ਮੁੱਖ ਬਿੰਦੂ ਤੇ ਧਿਆਨ ਦਿਓ ਅਤੇ ਲੰਬੇ ਅਤੇ ਗੁੰਝਲਦਾਰ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਤੋਂ ਬਚੋ।

示例: Yes, I have studied history during my childhood and college because I enjoy reading about the past. I believe everyone should know about their history to understand their culture better.

建议: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਗਲਤ ਬਣਤਰ ਅਤੇ ਅਸਪਸ਼ਟਤਾ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਜਾਣਕਾਰੀ ਨਾਲ ਭਰਪੂਰ ਬਣਾਓ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤ ਕੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਅਤੇ ਸਮਝਦਾਰ ਬਣਾਓ।

示例: I usually learn history by visiting libraries because they have many different history books. This helps me to get detailed information about various historical events.

建议: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਿਆਕਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕ-ਰਚਨਾ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ ਜੋ ਮਤਲਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਮਝਣ ਵਿੱਚ ਮੁਸ਼ਕਲ ਪੈਦਾ ਕਰਦੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੱਥਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਭਰਪੂਰ ਬਣਾਓ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੋਂ।

示例: Learning history helps me understand past mistakes in culture and society, so I can avoid repeating them in the future. It also teaches me valuable skills like critical thinking.

建议: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਿਆਕਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕ-ਰਚਨਾ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ ਜੋ ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਅਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਗੁੰਝਲਦਾਰ ਬਣਾਉਂਦੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ, ਸੰਖੇਪ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੱਥਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਭਰਪੂਰ ਬਣਾਓ।

示例: Yes, learning history is very important for everyone. It helps individuals understand what is right and wrong and become independent thinkers in society.

× I learned a different type of books in my childhood time and my college time because it's my hobby.

✓ I learned different types of books in my childhood and college time because it's my hobby.

ਇੱਥੇ 'a different type of books' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ ਕਿਉਂਕਿ 'books' ਬਹੁਵਚਨ ਹੈ, ਇਸ ਲਈ 'types' ਬਹੁਵਚਨ ਵਰਤਣਾ ਚਾਹੀਦਾ ਹੈ। 'a' ਸਿਰਫ ਇਕਵਚਨ ਲਈ ਵਰਤਿਆ ਜਾਂਦਾ ਹੈ। Here, 'a different type of books' is incorrect because 'books' is plural, so 'types' should be plural. The article 'a' is used only with singular nouns.

× I read the many books about history was I want and believe every person have to know about your history.

✓ I read many books about history that I want and believe every person has to know about their history.

'the many books' ਵਿੱਚ 'the' ਦੀ ਲੋੜ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ 'was I want' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਇਸ ਨੂੰ 'that I want' ਕਰਨਾ ਚਾਹੀਦਾ ਹੈ। 'every person have' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਸਹੀ ਹੈ 'every person has' ਕਿਉਂਕਿ 'every person' ਇਕਵਚਨ ਹੈ। 'your history' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'their history' ਵਰਤਣਾ ਚਾਹੀਦਾ ਹੈ। The phrase 'the many books' is incorrect; 'the' is unnecessary. 'was I want' is incorrect and should be 'that I want'. 'every person have' is wrong; it should be 'every person has' because 'every person' is singular. 'your history' should be 'their history' for general reference.

× Cortana, if I want to know about history, try visit to to the libraries because these are the very good.

✓ Cortana, if I want to know about history, I try to visit the libraries because they are very good.

'try visit to to the libraries' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਸਹੀ ਹੈ 'try to visit the libraries'। 'these are the very good' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'they are very good' ਵਰਤਣਾ ਚਾਹੀਦਾ ਹੈ। 'try visit to to the libraries' is incorrect; it should be 'try to visit the libraries'. Also, 'these are the very good' should be 'they are very good'.

× For to learn about the history, they can to provide the different type of history books.

✓ To learn about history, they can provide different types of history books.

'For to learn' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਸਹੀ ਹੈ 'To learn'। 'can to provide' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਸਹੀ ਹੈ 'can provide'। 'the different type' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'different types' ਵਰਤਣਾ ਚਾਹੀਦਾ ਹੈ। 'For to learn' is incorrect; it should be 'To learn'. 'can to provide' is wrong; it should be 'can provide'. 'the different type' should be 'different types'.

× I think if I have to learn about history, so I did the that things are wrong in the past for the culture and society so I have not to do the bad things in future and I also learned the many type of skills.

✓ I think if I learn about history, I understand the things that were wrong in the past for culture and society, so I will not do bad things in the future and I also learn many types of skills.

'if I have to learn' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਸਹੀ ਹੈ 'if I learn'। 'so I did the that things are wrong' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਸਹੀ ਹੈ 'I understand the things that were wrong'। 'I have not to do' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਸਹੀ ਹੈ 'I will not do'। 'learned the many type' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'learn many types' ਵਰਤਣਾ ਚਾਹੀਦਾ ਹੈ। 'if I have to learn' is incorrect; it should be 'if I learn'. 'so I did the that things are wrong' is wrong; it should be 'I understand the things that were wrong'. 'I have not to do' is incorrect; it should be 'I will not do'. 'learned the many type' should be 'learn many types'.

× I also learned the many type of skills.

✓ I also learned many types of skills.

'the many type of skills' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਸਹੀ ਹੈ 'many types of skills' ਕਿਉਂਕਿ 'type' ਬਹੁਵਚਨ ਹੋਣਾ ਚਾਹੀਦਾ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ 'the' ਦੀ ਲੋੜ ਨਹੀਂ। 'the many type of skills' is incorrect; it should be 'many types of skills' because 'type' should be plural and 'the' is unnecessary.

× Definitely these things are very important for the every individuals if person have to learn about history so they not.

✓ Definitely these things are very important for every individual. If a person learns about history, they will not...

'the every individuals' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਸਹੀ ਹੈ 'every individual' ਕਿਉਂਕਿ 'every' ਸਿੰਗੁਲਰ ਹੈ। 'if person have' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਸਹੀ ਹੈ 'if a person learns'। 'so they not' ਅਧੂਰਾ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਗਲਤ ਹੈ। 'the every individuals' is incorrect; it should be 'every individual' because 'every' is singular. 'if person have' is wrong; it should be 'if a person learns'. 'so they not' is incomplete and incorrect.

× so they not. To be dependent on their society and they can to learn the every right, wrong things.

✓ so they are not dependent on their society and they can learn every right and wrong thing.

'To be dependent' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'are dependent' ਵਰਤਣਾ ਚਾਹੀਦਾ ਹੈ। 'can to learn' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਸਹੀ ਹੈ 'can learn'। 'the every right, wrong things' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਸਹੀ ਹੈ 'every right and wrong thing'। 'To be dependent' should be 'are dependent'. 'can to learn' is incorrect; it should be 'can learn'. 'the every right, wrong things' is wrong; it should be 'every right and wrong thing'.