历史— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni uttor e kichu bhul grammar o obosthapona ache. Apni proshner uttor shorashori dite paren, tarpor kichu supporting details dite paren. Apnar kotha gulo aro spostho o sohoje bujhte parbe jodi apni sentence gulo shothik bhabe gathan koren ebong proyojon moto linking words babohar koren.

示例: No, I have never formally studied history because I am a science student. However, I believe it is important to learn about history to understand the world better.

建议: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar o sentence structure er bhul ache. Apni proshner uttor shorashori dite paren, tarpor kichu specific example dite paren. Linking words babohar korle uttor ta aro logical hobe.

示例: I usually learn history from books and reliable websites like Wikipedia. Also, I watch news channels like BBC and CNN. Moreover, my father often shares interesting historical stories with me.

建议: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar o clarity er somossa ache. Apni proshner uttor shorashori dite paren, tarpor kichu specific karon o example dite paren. Linking words babohar korle uttor ta aro bhalo hobe.

示例: Learning history is beneficial because it connects the past, present, and future. By understanding past events, we can make better decisions and avoid repeating mistakes in the future.

建议: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu aro kichu specific example o linking words add korle uttor ta aro natural o effective hobe.

示例: Yes, I think learning history is very important because it connects the past, present, and future. For example, by studying past wars, we can understand the causes and work towards peace in the future.

× I always emerge in science and I feel that I should know about the history and I should study it about that.

✓ I always immerse myself in science and I feel that I should know about history and study it.

The verb 'emerge' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'immerse' which means to involve oneself deeply in a subject. Also, 'study it about that' is awkward; it should be 'study it' or 'study about that'. The phrase 'immerse myself in science' correctly uses the reflexive pronoun and verb + -ing form.

× They are help me to learning about history however.

✓ They help me to learn about history, however.

The pronoun 'They' refers to multiple sources, so the verb should be 'help' not 'are help'. Also, 'to learning' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to learn'. The sentence structure is corrected to proper verb usage and infinitive form.

× My father knows many histories.

✓ My father knows a lot about history.

The word 'histories' is rarely used in plural in this context. 'History' is an uncountable noun here, so 'many histories' is incorrect. The correction uses 'a lot about history' to express knowledge of the subject.

× That's why history is the most beneficial things to learn and if you know your past, you know how to work in future.

✓ That's why history is the most beneficial thing to learn, and if you know your past, you know how to work in the future.

'Things' should be singular 'thing' because 'history' is singular. Also, 'in future' needs the definite article 'the' to be 'in the future'.

× That's why you should know the history really well.

✓ That's why you should know history really well.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'history' when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× By understanding our past, we can learn valuable lessons that help us make better decision in the future.

✓ By understanding our past, we can learn valuable lessons that help us make better decisions in the future.

'Decision' should be plural 'decisions' because 'lessons' is plural and implies multiple decisions. The quantifier agreement is corrected here.