故事— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“when was the child?”应为“When I was a child”。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免语法错误，同时使表达更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I loved stories when I was a child. Since there were no electronic devices to play with, listening to or reading stories was a great way to entertain myself.

建议: 回答中时态使用不准确，如“prefer”应为“preferred”或“liked”。另外，表达不够连贯，缺少连接词。建议注意时态一致性，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: When I was a child, I preferred listening to stories because I couldn't recognize the characters well. However, now I prefer reading them because I find reading more engaging.

建议: 回答中存在多处语法错误和拼写错误，如“was study”应为“was studying”，“tour”应为“story”。句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议加强语法基础，注意拼写和句子结构。

示例: No, I didn't write stories when I was a child. I was learning how to write and understand characters. Writing stories was difficult for me, so I preferred drawing because it was easier than writing.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，如“have”应为“has”，“energetical describe”表达不准确。建议使用正确的语法和更恰当的词汇表达观点。

示例: I prefer detective stories because they have logical plots that make them interesting. Also, the characters are described vividly, which keeps me engaged.

× Yes, when was the child?

✓ Yes, when I was a child?

原句缺少主语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充主语“I”使句子完整。

× listening stories or reading stories is a good way to amusement.

✓ listening to stories or reading stories is a good way to amuse oneself.

动词listen后应接介词to，且短语“a good way to amusement”用词错误，应为“a good way to amuse oneself”。

× I prefer listening to stories because at that time I couldn't identify the characters.

✓ I preferred listening to stories because at that time I couldn't identify the characters.

描述过去的习惯动作，应使用过去时态“preferred”而非现在时“prefer”。

× reading story is more engaged.

✓ reading stories is more engaging.

story应为复数stories，且engaged用法错误，应为形容词engaging。

× At that time I was study how tour writing and identify the characters.

✓ At that time I was studying how to write and identify the characters.

进行时态应使用动词的现在分词形式studying，且“tour writing”应为“to write”。

× Writing story is tough for me and at that time I prefer drawing because it's easier than writing down the stories.

✓ Writing stories was tough for me and at that time I preferred drawing because it was easier than writing down stories.

story应为复数stories，时态应统一为过去时，prefer改为preferred，it is改为it was。

× I prefer the detective stories because the kind of story not only have logical plots which makes the story more interesting but also it have energetical describe in characters in this story.

✓ I prefer detective stories because this kind of story not only has logical plots which make the story more interesting but also has energetic descriptions of characters.

主谓一致错误，kind of story为单数，动词应用has；have改为has；energetical用词错误，应为energetic；describe应为名词descriptions。