故事— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you love stories in your childhood?
考生
When I was a kid I enjoyed listening to stories on the TV. Now I am a mother and I enjoy writing kids stories for my daughter. My daughter feels happy and too much emotional about.
考官
Do you prefer listening to stories or reading them?
考生
I prefer reading stories over listening to them. I enjoy reading each line in a story. I also find myself being attracted to the titles and covers of the stories.
考官
Did you ever write a story when you were a child?
考生
In the past, while I was a student at school, we had to write many Arabic stories during Arabic lessons. My teacher was too much supportive and she selected me to write.
考官
What kind of stories do you like?
考生
I like to buy educational stories for my daughter. My daughter likes to read stories but she keeps on damaging these stories because she cannot grasp well the books.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you love stories in your childhood?
分数: 65.0建议: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding awkward phrases like "too much emotional about". Also, keep your sentences concise and directly related to the question. You can add linking words to improve coherence.
示例: When I was a child, I loved listening to stories on TV. Now, as a mother, I enjoy writing children's stories for my daughter because it makes her happy and emotional in a good way.
Do you prefer listening to stories or reading them?
分数: 75.0建议: Your answer is clear but can be improved by adding linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to provide more specific reasons or examples to support your preference.
示例: I prefer reading stories rather than listening to them because I enjoy focusing on each line carefully. Moreover, the attractive titles and covers often catch my attention and make me curious to read more.
Did you ever write a story when you were a child?
分数: 60.0建议: Avoid awkward expressions like "too much supportive"; instead, use "very supportive". Also, clarify your answer by explaining what you wrote or how it felt. Use linking words to connect your ideas.
示例: When I was a student, we had to write many Arabic stories during lessons. Fortunately, my teacher was very supportive and even selected me to write a story for the class.
What kind of stories do you like?
分数: 55.0建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words. Also, explain why you prefer educational stories and clarify the issue with your daughter.
示例: I prefer buying educational stories for my daughter because they help her learn. However, she often damages the books since she finds them difficult to understand fully.
语法
× My daughter feels happy and too much emotional about.
✓ My daughter feels happy and very emotional about it.
The phrase 'too much emotional' is incorrect because 'emotional' is an adjective and should be modified by 'very' instead of 'too much', which is used with uncountable nouns or verbs. Also, the sentence lacks an object after 'about', so adding 'it' completes the thought.
× I enjoy listening to stories on the TV.
✓ I enjoy listening to stories on TV.
The article 'the' is unnecessary before 'TV' when referring to television in general. The correct prepositional phrase is 'on TV'.
× My teacher was too much supportive and she selected me to write.
✓ My teacher was very supportive and she selected me to write.
The phrase 'too much supportive' is incorrect because 'supportive' is an adjective and should be modified by 'very' instead of 'too much', which is used with uncountable nouns or verbs.
× she keeps on damaging these stories because she cannot grasp well the books.
✓ she keeps damaging these stories because she cannot grasp the books well.
The phrase 'keeps on damaging' is acceptable but 'keeps damaging' is more natural. Also, the adverb 'well' should be placed after the object 'the books' for correct word order.
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