故事— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınız doğal ancak "listening stories" ifadesi yerine "listening to stories" demeniz daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, cümlenizi biraz daha detaylandırarak ve bağlaçlar kullanarak daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

示例: I always loved stories since I was a kid because my parents used to read them to me every night, which made my childhood very memorable.

建议: "Listening stories" yerine "listening to stories" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanarak nedenlerinizi açıklayabilirsiniz.

示例: I prefer listening to stories because my mom used to tell me stories on my bed, and I found it more engaging than reading.

建议: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları var. "That's my not interested field" ifadesi yanlış. Doğru ifade "I'm not interested in that field" olmalıdır. Ayrıca, cevabınızı biraz daha açıklayıcı yapabilirsiniz.

示例: No, I never wrote stories as a child because I wasn't interested in writing; I preferred listening to stories instead.

建议: "I'm crazy over" ifadesi gayri resmi olabilir, daha uygun bir ifade kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, "they're making me feel me like a Princess" ifadesi dilbilgisi açısından yanlış. Doğru ifade "they make me feel like a princess" olmalıdır.

示例: I really enjoy fairy tales because they make me happy and make me feel like a princess.

× My childhood was all about listening stories.

✓ My childhood was all about listening to stories.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Therefore, 'listening stories' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to stories.'

× I prefer listening stories.

✓ I prefer listening to stories.

The verb 'listen' must be followed by the preposition 'to' before the object. Hence, 'listening stories' is incorrect; the correct form is 'listening to stories.'

× I was listening to her.

✓ I listened to her.

Since the context is about habitual actions in the past, the simple past tense 'listened' is more appropriate than the past continuous 'was listening.'

× No, I don't love writing stories.

✓ No, I don't like writing stories.

The verb 'love' is generally used for strong feelings, but in negative sentences about preferences, 'like' is more natural. Also, 'don't love' is less common in this context than 'don't like.'

× That's my not interested field.

✓ That's not my field of interest.

The phrase 'my not interested field' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'my field of interest' or 'not my field of interest.' The pronoun and adjective order is incorrect here.

× They're making me feel me like a Princess.

✓ They make me feel like a princess.

The phrase 'making me feel me like a Princess' is incorrect. The correct form is 'make me feel like a princess.' Also, 'princess' should not be capitalized unless it is a title.