广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, dùng câu chủ đề trực tiếp và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (thì, số nhiều/ít, đại từ) và nói ngắn gọn trong tối đa 3–4 câu. Có thể nêu lý do vì sao quảng cáo gây ấn tượng (hình ảnh, âm nhạc, nhân vật) và liên hệ cảm xúc.

示例: When I was a child, I was very impressed by a Dawn advertisement. It featured a little girl with a dreamy storyline and catchy music, which made it memorable. I remember the colourful visuals and how it made me imagine the product as magical.

建议: Cần câu mở chủ đề trực tiếp và dùng từ vựng chính xác (advertisements, on public transport). Thêm thông tin cụ thể và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và mở rộng bằng một ví dụ ngắn.

示例: Yes, I do. I often see advertisements on buses and trains, especially posters and digital screens. For example, there are usually ads for mobile apps and local events on the subway in my city.

建议: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần mở rộng bằng lý do cụ thể và ví dụ. Dùng liên từ để giải thích hậu quả hoặc so sánh. Giữ câu ngắn gọn và tự nhiên.

示例: No, I don't really like advertisements because too many of them feel intrusive. For instance, constant pop-ups on websites interrupt my reading and make the experience unpleasant.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả loại quảng cáo (e.g., interactive, humorous). Hãy đưa ra lý do vì sao bạn thích loại đó và một ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh cấu trúc mơ hồ như 'and so on'.

示例: I prefer interactive and fun advertisements, such as Coca-Cola campaigns that include games or live events. These ads engage me because they invite participation and create a positive experience.

建议: Cần dùng từ nối phù hợp và ngữ pháp chính xác. Trả lời trực tiếp, nêu tần suất (often, frequently) và liệt kê cụ thể loại quảng cáo bạn thấy. Không dùng cụm từ mơ hồ như 'and so on'.

示例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on my phone, especially for mobile games and shopping apps. For example, social media apps frequently show video ads for new game releases.

× That's when I was a child. I was very impressed by the Dawn advertisement.

✓ That was when I was a child. I was very impressed by the Dawn advertisement.

The phrase 'That's when I was a child' mixes present contraction 'that's' with a past time reference. Use past 'That was' to match 'I was a child' and 'was very impressed'. Suggestion: Use consistent tense for time expressions and events in the past, e.g., 'That was when I was a child.'

× They were very little girl dream.

✓ It was the dream of a little girl.

Original sentence lacks a clear subject and has incorrect plural 'They' and word order. Recast with singular subject 'It' referring to the advertisement and correct noun phrase 'the dream of a little girl.' Suggestion: Make the subject clear and use proper noun phrase order: 'It was the dream of a little girl.'

× Yes I do. I easily see advertisement from company on other transport.

✓ Yes, I do. I often see advertisements from companies on other transport.

Problems: 'easily' is misused (means without difficulty); 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when speaking generally; 'from company' needs plural or article; 'on other transport' is awkward — use 'on other forms of transport' or 'on other transport'. Also use adverb 'often' for frequency. Suggestion: Use 'often' for frequency, pluralize countable nouns, and use 'companies' or 'a company' as appropriate.

× No I don't because I feel uncomfortable when there is too much.

✓ No, I don't, because I feel uncomfortable when there are too many.

Mismatch between 'too much' (used for uncountable nouns) and plural countable noun implied ('advertisements'). Use 'there are too many' for countable plural items and plural verb agreement. Suggestion: Use 'too many' with countable nouns: 'there are too many (advertisements).'

× I think it about coke game, fun activity and so on.

✓ I think about things like Coke games, fun activities, and so on.

Original 'I think it about' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'I think about' and pluralize listed items; capitalize proper noun 'Coke' and use parallel plural forms. Suggestion: Use 'I think about' + 'things like' and ensure parallel structure: 'Coke games, fun activities.'

× Thus I easily see a lot of advertisement on my phone about game, coop and so on.

✓ So I often see a lot of advertisements on my phone about games, apps, and so on.

'Thus' is formal and unnatural here; 'easily' is misused; 'advertisement' should be plural; 'game, coop' are unclear — likely 'games, apps' or 'games, coupons, etc.' Use 'often' for frequency and plural nouns. Suggestion: Use 'So' or 'Therefore' in speech, use 'often' for frequency, pluralize countable nouns, and choose clear nouns like 'games' or 'apps.'