广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更直接并改善语法与表达。开头可以先给出主题句，然后用一两句具体细节说明为什么印象深刻。注意动词时态与词汇搭配（例如 say → saw, silky feel 可改为 “silky texture”）。避免冗长或重复。

示例: Yes. I remember a Double Chocolate commercial from my childhood. It showed a child enjoying the candy and repeated the slogan “silky texture,” which made the product seem rich and memorable.

建议: 回答需更准确用词并结构清晰。用现在时描述常见情况（see/see a lot of ads），改正词汇错误（investment/advancement → advertisements/ads）。可以给出一两个具体例子并用连接词衔接。

示例: Yes, I see many advertisements on public transport such as trains, subways and taxis. For example, subway carriages often have posters and digital screens, while taxis may carry roof-top ads.

建议: 回答前后矛盾且语法混乱。先确定立场（like or dislike），然后给出清晰原因并用连接词展开。避免未完成的句子与拼写错误（advertisement, advertising）。

示例: No, I don't like most advertisements, especially pop-ups on my phone. When I try to watch a video, ads interrupt me frequently and that ruins the experience.

建议: 回答要更流畅并用恰当词汇表达观点。把要点分成主题句和支持句，说明喜欢的广告类型并给出理由。改正词语错误（married → material? likely “image” or “features”; advertem advertising → advertisement; time saving and conveniently → time-saving and convenient）。

示例: I prefer concise advertisements that clearly show the product, its features and the price. Such ads save time and help me quickly decide whether I'm interested.

建议: 把动词和名词用法改正（say → see; advisement → advertisements）。用现在时描述频率并给出具体场景或例子，使用连接词使句子更连贯。避免重复“always”。

示例: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on my phone because I use social media apps like WeChat and TikTok. For instance, short video apps often show sponsored clips between videos.

× Absolutely. When I was a child, I was deeply impressed by an advertisement about Double Chocolate because in its videos it taught me a slogan about silky feel.

✓ Absolutely. When I was a child, I was deeply impressed by an advertisement for Double Chocolate because in its videos it taught me a slogan about its silky feel.

问题类型：现在时/动词和名词搭配错误（归类为“Present tense issue”在列表中）。句中“about Double Chocolate”与常用搭配不自然，通常说“an advertisement for …”。另外“silky feel”前应加所有格“its”表示广告描述产品的触感。建议：使用固定搭配“advertisement for”并在表示属性时使用所有格如“its silky feel”。

× Definitely. I always saw a lot of investment on trains, subways, taxi or other public transport, but I almost never say advancement on private cars.

✓ Definitely. I always see a lot of advertising on trains, subways, taxis and other public transport, but I almost never see advertising on private cars.

问题类型：介词和词汇使用不当。原句用“investment”“advancement”“say”均不符合语境。应使用“see”保持现在习惯性动作；“advertising”表示广告；复数名词“taxis”；并用“on”搭配交通工具。建议：使用合适词汇（see, advertising）和正确复数形式，保持介词“on”。

× Absolutely. I don't like advertisement, especially when I want to watch a film on my mobile phones. The apps always show me otherwise advisement which is very boring and.

✓ Absolutely. I don't like advertisements, especially when I want to watch a film on my mobile phone. The apps always show me irrelevant advertisements, which is very boring.

问题类型：代词/名词形式及词汇使用错误。需要改为复数“advertisements”；“mobile phones”在此应为单数“mobile phone”；“otherwise advisement”不合适，改为“irrelevant advertisements”；句尾不应以“and”结束，应完整句子并加逗号后接定语从句。建议：注意名词单复数，一致使用单数或复数；避免错误搭配，使用恰当形容词如“irrelevant”。

× Actually I like the advertising which it can clearly show the product the married and price because I think if the advertem advertising is brief it will time saving and conveniently.

✓ Actually I like advertisements that clearly show the product features and price, because I think if the advertising is brief it will save time and be convenient.

问题类型：代词与从句引导词使用错误。原句中“which it”重复，应该用“that”或“which”之一引导定语从句；“the married”显然是错误词，应为“features”或“details”；“advertem advertising”是笔误，应为“advertising”；“it will time saving and conveniently”应改为“it will save time and be convenient”。建议：使用单一关系词（that/which），检查词汇拼写，用形容词/动词短语正确表达（save time, be convenient）。

× Definitely, I always say a lot of advertisements on my mobile phone because I always use the social media apps or with their apps such as WeChat and Tiktok. There are lots of advisement on it.

✓ Definitely, I always see a lot of advertisements on my mobile phone because I always use social media apps such as WeChat and TikTok. There are lots of advertisements on them.

问题类型：现在时/动词使用不当。将“say”改为“see”以表达“看到广告”；去掉多余的“the”并使用复数“apps”；“with their apps”不必要，改为直接列举；“advisement”拼写错误，改为“advertisements”；指代应用程序用“them”。建议：使用正确动词“see”，注意复数形式和拼写，确保代词与先行词一致（them 指 apps）。