广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Сократите паузы и заполнители (uh), стройте предложение ясно: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте одно-два уточняющих предложения с конкретным примером. Работайте над порядком слов и согласованием (например, «an advertisement made an impression on me»). Используйте связки для логики: 'for example', 'when', 'because'.

示例: Yes. One advertisement that impressed me as a child was a cartoon commercial for a cereal. It used bright colors and a catchy tune, so I remember it clearly. For example, every morning I would sing the jingle before school, which made the ad memorable.

建议: Уберите лишние вспомогательные слова и говорите связно: начните с прямого 'Yes, I do' и добавьте конкретику — где именно вы видите рекламу и как часто. Используйте связующие слова: 'for example', 'often', 'when'. Попробуйте сокращать предложения и следить за грамматикой (например, 'when I travel by bus or taxi').

示例: Yes, I do. I often see adverts on buses and inside taxis, especially on my commute to work. For example, there are posters above the seats and digital screens that show promotions every day.

建议: Выражайте мнение прямо и давайте причину без лишних пауз: начните с 'No, I don't like advertisements' и объясните почему. Избегайте неправильных форм ('I'm because'). Дайте одно конкретное примера, как реклама мешает просмотру.

示例: No, I don't like advertisements very much because they interrupt films and TV series. For instance, I often stop watching or skip when an ad break appears in the middle of a favourite show.

建议: Хорошая идея и содержание — развивайте аккуратно: начните с ясного утверждения, затем объясните причины и приведите пример. Уберите междометия (UH) и уточните фразы ('scholarships', 'stand out to me'). Можно добавить одно предложение с конкретным примером объявления об обучении за границей.

示例: I prefer advertisements about education, especially those promoting study abroad programs, because they provide useful information about scholarships and application deadlines. For example, a recent ad explained a scholarship scheme for international students and included a website link to apply.

建议: Говорите кратко и грамотно: начните с 'No, I don't like ads on my devices' и объясните, как они мешают работе, приведите пример (например, всплывающие окна). Сократите до 2–3 предложений и используйте связку 'because' для причины.

示例: No, I don't like seeing adverts on my phone or computer because they interrupt my work and slow down pages. For example, pop-up ads often appear while I am typing an email, which is very distracting.

× There were advertisements, uh, impression my when, uh, I was a child and when I saw the cartoon or maybe.

✓ There were advertisements that made an impression on me when I was a child, especially when I watched cartoons.

The original sentence uses incorrect word forms and order. 'Impression my' should be 'an impression on me' (preposition and object pronoun). 'Cartoon' should be plural or with article and 'watched' fits the past context. Use 'that made an impression on me' to correctly link adjective 'impressed' meaning. Improve by practicing noun phrases with 'impression on someone' and proper word order.

× On TV and that their impressions a lot of advertisement as a light.

✓ On TV, many advertisements left a strong impression on me.

The original has incorrect pronouns and word order: 'that their impressions' is wrong; use 'many advertisements' (quantifier + plural noun). 'Left a strong impression' is the correct idiom. Practice forming subject-verb-object structures and common collocations like 'leave an impression'.

× Uh, yes, of course I see all of advertisement, uh, when I, I get around the transport by bus or by taxi and because, uh, there have a lot of time when I, uh, when I go to work and buy transport.

✓ Yes, of course I see many advertisements when I travel by bus or taxi, because there are many opportunities to see them on my commute to work.

The phrase 'all of advertisement' is ungrammatical; use 'many advertisements' (correct quantifier + plural). 'Get around the transport' should be 'travel by bus or taxi'. 'There have' is incorrect; use 'there are'. Focus on correct quantifiers and the 'there is/are' structure.

× I wouldn't prefer advertisements.

✓ I don't prefer advertisements.

'Wouldn't prefer' suggests conditional preference; simple present 'don't prefer' correctly states a general preference. Modal 'would' is unnecessary here. Use simple present for habitual likes/dislikes.

× I'm because, uh, when I see films and it's a disturbed, uh, my series and uh, films and uh, I change my mind to advertisements.

✓ I don't like them because when I watch films or series, advertisements interrupt them and I get annoyed.

The original sentence has disfluent structure and wrong word choices: 'it's a disturbed' and 'I change my mind to advertisements' are incorrect. Use 'interrupt' and 'get annoyed' or 'they disturb me' to express the idea. Practice combining clauses with 'because' and maintaining subject-verb clarity.

× I prefer UH advertisement about education, especially studying abroad because they give useful information about opportunities and the scholarships.

✓ I prefer advertisements about education, especially those about studying abroad, because they give useful information about opportunities and scholarships.

Use plural 'advertisements' and 'those about' to refer back. 'The scholarships' should be 'scholarships' without the definite article unless specific. Practice article use with countable nouns and reference words like 'those'.

× However, most as in my country are about cars, so educational ads really stands out to me.

✓ However, most advertisements in my country are about cars, so educational ads really stand out to me.

'Most as in my country' is incorrect; use 'most advertisements in my country'. 'Ads really stands' has subject-verb agreement error; with plural 'ads' use 'stand'. Check plural forms and verb agreement.

× No, I wouldn't prefer advertisements, uh, when I, uh, set my phone or computer because this disturbance to my work and the, the, uh, and that this is disturbed in my opinion. I wouldn't often to see.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements on my phone or computer because they disturb my work, so I don't want to see them often.

Again 'wouldn't prefer' is incorrect for general preference; use 'don't like' or 'I don't want'. 'Set my phone' should be 'use my phone'. 'This disturbance to my work' should be 'they disturb my work'. Avoid unnecessary modals and ensure correct verb forms and infinitive use ('to see' not 'to see' after 'wouldn't often').