广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构不完整。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免语法错误，同时丰富细节，使回答更具体。

示例: Yes, definitely. I still remember a medical advertisement from my childhood because it had a simple and catchy melody that I can still sing today.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子较长且缺少连贯的连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，并具体说明广告内容。

示例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on the MRT. For example, there are colorful political posters that catch people's attention and make the journey more interesting.

建议: 回答较为清晰，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“a lot ads”。建议注意冠词使用和词汇搭配，同时增加细节使内容更丰富。

示例: Actually, I like advertisements because they help me learn about the latest trends and what interests most people. For example, this month many ads promote Christmas gifts and decorations.

建议: 回答表达不清，语法错误多，句子结构混乱。建议简化表达，使用正确的语法和词汇，明确说明喜欢的视频广告类型及原因。

示例: I like video advertisements because I enjoy comedy and funny plots that make the ads interesting and easy to remember.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，表达不连贯。建议注意主谓一致，避免句子残缺，并补充具体细节使回答完整。

示例: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer. It is almost impossible to avoid them because many apps rely on ads to generate revenue. For example, social media platforms frequently show ads to their users.

× I still remember an advertisement about medical selling because it's always give me a very simple and strong melody and I can still sing it right now.

✓ I still remember an advertisement about medical selling because it always gives me a very simple and strong melody and I can still sing it right now.

这里动词give应该用第三人称单数形式gives，因为主语it是第三人称单数。

× I do see a lot advertising on the MRT.

✓ I do see a lot of advertising on the MRT.

短语中需要使用介词of连接a lot和advertising，表示大量的广告。

× these are often political company poster advertisements for support evidence because these ads are usually very colorful and eye-catching which make the journey more interesting.

✓ these are often political company poster advertisements to support evidence because these ads are usually very colorful and eye-catching which make the journey more interesting.

介词for用法不当，应该用to表示目的，即“为了支持证据”。

× which make the journey more interesting.

✓ which makes the journey more interesting.

关系代词which指代单数ads，动词应使用第三人称单数makes。

× so I can see a lot ads promoting gifts and decorate.

✓ so I can see a lot of ads promoting gifts and decorations.

a lot后面应加介词of，ads应为复数，decorate应改为名词decorations。

× I like the advertising presence by video because I love the comedy style or a funny plots that can make me uh interesting and to hard memorize the advertising.

✓ I like advertising presented by video because I love the comedy style or funny plots that can make me interested and help me memorize the advertising easily.

介词by改为presented by更合适；funny plots复数形式；make me interesting应为make me interested；to hard memorize表达不正确，改为help me memorize easily。

× it is almost impossible to avoid advertisements when using my or computer because most app companies relies on ads to generate revenues.

✓ it is almost impossible to avoid advertisements when using my phone or computer because most app companies rely on ads to generate revenues.

缺少phone一词；companies为复数，动词应为复数形式rely。

× social media platforms show ads to supports and.

✓ social media platforms show ads to support them.

supports用法错误，应为动词不定式to support，and后缺少宾语，补充them。