广告— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
考生
Uh, I can't remember clearly, but I guess when I was a child I didn't see any advertisement, uh, because I will choose skip them, uh, when I was watching TV or screwing through apps umm, but if I can't skip this advertisement, I will choose to do other.
考官
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
考生
No, uh, in most of time I prefer to play me my phones like, uh, playing games or just watching some funny videos. Uh, to be honest with you, I prefer to let me in vendor instead of watching advertisements because I think this.
考官
Do you like advertisements?
考生
No, I don't like it. It's a really weird question because it always waste my time, especially when I need to use some websites. For example, why need to use the translate websites? Sometimes I have to watch the advertisement and I feel really annoyed.
考官
What kind of advertising do you like?
考生
I think all kinds of advertisement are not my thing because they will really waste my time. But sometimes I will hook by the uh, food, uh, eyes because I want to try different kind of new food. But uh, uh, you know it, I will get a lot of calorie from junk food.
考官
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
考生
Yes, definitely, because the advertisement stay anywhere you can't escape from them. Especially when you need to use some free apps or websites, you can skip the forced advertisement. It's really totally with time.
评估
总分
Part 1
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答不够自然流畅，存在重复和语法错误。建议简化表达，避免使用填充词，直接回答问题并补充具体细节。
示例: I don't remember any specific advertisement from my childhood because I usually skipped them while watching TV or using apps. If I couldn't skip, I would do something else to avoid watching.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有误。建议直接回答问题，并用连词连接具体细节，表达更连贯。
示例: No, I don't see many advertisements on trains because I usually focus on playing games or watching videos on my phone during the ride.
Do you like advertisements?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答较为直接，但表达中有语法错误和不自然的用词。建议使用更准确的语法和丰富词汇，表达观点更清晰。
示例: No, I don't like advertisements because they waste my time, especially when I have to watch them before using websites like translation services, which can be very annoying.
What kind of advertising do you like?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，表达更自然。
示例: I usually don't like advertisements because they waste my time. However, I sometimes get attracted by food ads because I enjoy trying new dishes, even though I know junk food can be unhealthy.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更准确连贯。
示例: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone or computer because they appear everywhere. Especially on free apps or websites, sometimes I can skip the ads, but they still take up a lot of my time.
语法
× because I will choose skip them
✓ because I would choose to skip them
这里使用的是过去的情境，应该用情态动词的过去式would表示假设或过去习惯，而不是将来时的will。
× when I was watching TV or screwing through apps
✓ when I was watching TV or scrolling through apps
动词'screw'用错了，正确的表达是'scroll through apps'，表示浏览应用。
× if I can't skip this advertisement, I will choose to do other
✓ if I can't skip this advertisement, I would choose to do other things
这里是虚拟条件句，应该用would表示假设，同时'do other'不完整，需补充'do other things'。
× in most of time I prefer to play me my phones
✓ most of the time I prefer to play on my phone
'most of time'缺少定冠词'the'，'play me my phones'表达错误，正确是'play on my phone'。
× I prefer to play me my phones
✓ I prefer to play on my phone
'play me my phones'中'play me'用法错误，应该是'play on my phone'，表示在手机上玩。
× I prefer to let me in vendor instead of watching advertisements
✓ I prefer to let myself be entertained instead of watching advertisements
'let me in vendor'表达不清，应该用'reflect自己'的正确用法'let myself be entertained'。
× I don't like it
✓ I don't like them
前文提到的是'advertisements'复数，代词应使用复数'them'。
× why need to use the translate websites?
✓ why do I need to use translation websites?
缺少主语和助动词，且'translate websites'应为'translation websites'。
× different kind of new food
✓ different kinds of new food
'kind'应使用复数形式'kinds'，且后接复数名词。
× you can skip the forced advertisement
✓ you can skip the forced advertisements
这里指的是多次出现的广告，应该用复数形式。
× It's really totally with time
✓ It really wastes time
原句表达不清，应该用'wastes time'表示浪费时间。
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