广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构有误，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连接，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, definitely. I remember seeing a television advertisement for the iPhone 4 by Apple. The slogan "Think Different" and the fantastic technology really impressed me. Because of that, I became a big fan of Apple.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如冠词使用和动词形式。建议加强语法准确性，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, of course. It is very common to see advertisements on public transportation, such as at bus stations and inside airplanes. These advertisements always catch people's attention.

建议: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误和重复词汇。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复，并使用更丰富的词汇。

示例: I think it really depends on the type of advertisement. For example, I find ads about new technologies, such as smartphones and robots, very interesting. However, some advertisements can be misleading or fake, which makes me dislike them.

建议: 回答中存在词汇使用错误和语法问题，如“attachment advertisement”和动词形式。建议使用正确词汇，注意时态和主谓一致，并简化表达。

示例: I definitely like advertisements about new technologies, such as smartphones and robots, because they show the latest innovations. These ads really catch my attention when I see them in subway stations or on public transportation.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习完整句子表达，避免重复词汇，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

示例: Yes, of course. It is very common to see advertisements on computers and smartphones. For example, when you open a video streaming app or website, you often see a large advertisement before the video starts.

× It the product was iPhone 4 and the slogan was Think Different and Fantastic technology impressed me a lot.

✓ The product was iPhone 4, and the slogan was "Think Different." The fantastic technology impressed me a lot.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和连接词，导致句子不通顺。应分成两句，明确主语和谓语，使表达清晰。

× It's very common to see the advertisement on the public transportation, for example the bus station and inside the airplane.

✓ It's very common to see advertisements on public transportation, for example at bus stations and inside airplanes.

介词使用不当，'on the public transportation'应为'on public transportation'，'the bus station'应为'bus stations'，'inside the airplane'应为'inside airplanes'，表示泛指。

× The advertisement always catch people's attention on it.

✓ The advertisements always catch people's attention.

主谓不一致，'advertisement'单数时谓语应为'catches'，但句中应为复数'advertisements'，谓语用'catch'。此外，'on it'多余，应去掉。

× Uh, I think it's really depend on the type of advertisement.

✓ Uh, I think it really depends on the type of advertisement.

动词形式错误，'depend'应为第三人称单数形式'depends'，因为主语是'it'。

× For example, I find advertisements about new new technologies such as smartphone and robots very interesting.

✓ For example, I find advertisements about new technologies such as smartphones and robots very interesting.

名词单复数错误，'smartphone'应为复数'smartphones'，'new new'重复，应改为'smartphones'。

× Definitely the attachment advertisement about new technologies such as smartphone and robots because they shows the latest innovation and I think those advertisements are really catch my attention when I saw it on the subway station or other public transportation.

✓ Definitely the attached advertisements about new technologies such as smartphones and robots because they show the latest innovation, and I think those advertisements really catch my attention when I see them at the subway station or other public transportation.

主谓不一致，'they shows'应为'they show'，'advertisement'应为复数'advertisements'，'smartphone'应为复数'smartphones'，时态应统一，'saw'改为'see'，'on the subway station'应为'at the subway station'。

× The advertisement always catch people's attention on it.

✓ The advertisements always catch people's attention.

'on it'多余且不正确，去掉即可。

× Uh, yes, of course it's very common to see the the advertisement on the computer and smartphone.

✓ Uh, yes, of course it's very common to see advertisements on computers and smartphones.

名词单复数错误，'advertisement'应为复数'advertisements'，'computer'和'smartphone'应为复数形式。

× For example, when you open the application about video Internet website is very common to see a huge advertisement before a video and I think it's.

✓ For example, when you open a video application or an internet website, it is very common to see a huge advertisement before a video, and I think it's annoying.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，表达不完整。应补充完整句子，使意思明确。