广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和关系代词，避免重复和口语填充词。

示例: Yes, I remember an advertisement from my childhood that featured a singer performing a very difficult song. The song impressed me so much that I can still sing it today.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的主谓一致，简洁表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: Yes, advertisements are very common on public transport. I often dislike them because they are noisy and waste my time, and sometimes the sounds even bother me.

建议: 表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意时态和词汇搭配。

示例: To be honest, I don't like advertisements because they take up too much of my time. When I scroll on my phone, I often see many ads, so I usually click the cancel button to skip them.

建议: 句子结构不完整，重复表达，语法错误。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: I like funny advertisements because they help me relax after a stressful day. Often, these ads make me laugh, which is very enjoyable.

建议: 表达较为口语化且有语法错误，建议使用更正式和准确的表达，注意句子结构和词汇选择。

示例: Yes, I often see advertisements when I watch videos on my phone. Usually, these apps show ads before the videos, but I pay for the VIP version so I can skip them.

× I remember there are an advertisement

✓ I remember there is an advertisement

这里的主语是单数名词“an advertisement”，谓语动词应该用单数形式“is”，而不是复数形式“are”。

× uh who, which has a singer to sing a very like sound, very difficult song

✓ which has a singer singing a very unique, very difficult song

“who”用法不当，且“to sing a very like sound”表达不清，应改为“singing a very unique, very difficult song”更符合英语表达习惯。

× the song caught my mind and I can sing it till now

✓ the song caught my mind and I can still sing it now

“till now”用法不准确，应该用“still”表示持续到现在的状态。

× advertisement are very common to see on the transportations

✓ advertisements are very common to see on transportation

“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”，且“transportations”通常不可数，改为“transportation”。

× I often hate this since it's very noisy and it's just like a waste of my time and it sometimes they have the noise that will affected me too

✓ I often hate this since it's very noisy and it's just a waste of my time, and sometimes the noise affects me too

“it sometimes they have the noise”结构混乱，应简化为“sometimes the noise”，且“affected”应为现在时“affects”。

× I don't like advertisement

✓ I don't like advertisements

“advertisement”应为复数形式“advertisements”，表示一般意义上的广告。

× I think it costs too much time from me

✓ I think it takes too much of my time

“costs ... from me”表达不正确，应该用“takes too much of my time”表示占用时间。

× I will find a lot of advertisement

✓ I will find a lot of advertisements

“advertisement”应为复数形式“advertisements”，表示多个广告。

× Just get out and I will just click the cancel option to jump it on

✓ Just get out and I will just click the cancel option to skip it

“jump it on”表达不正确，应该用“skip it”表示跳过广告。

× I'd like those advertisement are very funny

✓ I'd like those advertisements that are very funny

“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”，且句子结构需调整，添加“that”。

× often the advertisements are very funny can help me laugh at

✓ often the advertisements are very funny and can help me laugh

缺少连词“and”，且“laugh at”用法不当，应为“help me laugh”。

× I really use my phone to see some videos and those application will like jump up some advertisement before you see these videos

✓ I often use my phone to watch some videos and those applications will pop up some advertisements before you watch these videos

“see”改为“watch”更合适，“application”应为复数“applications”，“jump up”用法不当，改为“pop up”。

× those application will like jump up some advertisement

✓ those applications will pop up some advertisements

“application”和“advertisement”应为复数形式。

× I will just click the cancel option to jump it on

✓ I will just click the cancel option to skip it

“jump it on”表达错误，正确表达是“skip it”，表示跳过广告。