广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态使用不当和句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的时态，简洁明了地表达观点，并避免口头语。

示例: Yes, I remember an advertisement from my childhood that advised people not to throw letters carelessly. It impressed me because it told a meaningful story that was easy to understand.

建议: 回答中出现了词汇错误（如'trees'应为'trains'，'mature'可能是'metro'），表达不清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，避免发音或拼写错误，并用连贯的句子表达观点。

示例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and buses. I think this is an effective way to increase product popularity because many people use public transport daily.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如'informations'应为'information'，句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确的单复数形式，简洁表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: It depends on the situation. I dislike advertisements that interrupt movies, but I like them when I want to find useful information.

建议: 回答中词汇使用不准确，表达不清晰。建议使用准确的词汇，避免重复，并用具体例子支持观点。

示例: I prefer advertisements that provide useful information. For example, when I look for job opportunities, I find ads that describe professions very helpful.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯。建议注意语法结构，使用正确的副词形式，并使句子完整连贯。

示例: Yes, of course. In today's modern society, technology develops quickly, so we see more and more advertisements on websites and phone apps, which are hard to avoid.

× Yes, I remembered the advertisement made an impression on me.

✓ Yes, I remember the advertisement made an impression on me.

这里应该使用一般现在时，因为问题是关于过去的经历，但回答中表达的是记忆的状态，通常用一般现在时表示记忆的事实。

× It's umm advise people don't throw letters carelessly.

✓ It advises people not to throw letters carelessly.

动词advise需要第三人称单数形式advises，且后面应使用不定式结构not to throw，而不是直接用动词原形。

× And I remembered it so clearly because it told us a story, no.

✓ And I remember it so clearly because it told us a story.

句子中“no”用法不当，应去掉；同时保持时态一致，使用一般现在时remember。

× Yes, I see a lot of advertising on trees and mature or bars.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertising on trains and metro or bars.

原句中“trees”和“mature”拼写错误，应为“trains”和“metro”，表示交通工具。

× I think it's the best way to improve the products popularity.

✓ I think it's the best way to improve the product's popularity.

“products popularity”缺少所有格，应为“product's popularity”。

× If I am watching movies when private advertisements raises, I dislike,

✓ If I am watching movies when private advertisements appear, I dislike them,

“raises”用法错误，应使用“appear”表示广告出现；“dislike”后应加宾语“them”。

× but if I want to get some informations I like advertisements.

✓ but if I want to get some information, I like advertisements.

“information”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“informations”。

× I like advertising which could offer some more informations to me.

✓ I like advertising which could offer me more information.

同上，“information”不可数，且“offer me more information”表达更自然。

× For example, when I seek someone preferences, professions, I hope I could get some information from the advertisement.

✓ For example, when I seek someone's preferences or professions, I hope I can get some information from the advertisement.

“someone preferences”应为“someone's preferences”，表示所有格；“could”改为“can”更符合语境。

× Yes, of course, it's a modern society with the technological developed fastly more and more advertisement on website or phone app and we can't. Avoid.

✓ Yes, of course, it's a modern society with technology developing fast, and more and more advertisements on websites or phone apps, and we can't avoid them.

“technological developed fastly”表达错误，应为“technology developing fast”；“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”；“website”应为复数“websites”；句子结构需调整使其通顺。