广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

示例: Yes, there was one advertisement that impressed me as a child. It was about a snake called Xijilan, which is very famous in China. I still remember it clearly because it was very unique.

建议: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I see many advertisements on trains and taxis in China. For example, on a high-speed train, I noticed ads for mooncakes and other products, which made the journey more interesting.

建议: 回答含糊且有许多语气词，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，减少语气词，使用清晰的句子表达观点。

示例: I like advertisements about delicious food, such as snacks and mooncakes, because they look appealing. However, I don't enjoy ads related to doctors or medical topics.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够简洁。建议使用更自然的表达，避免重复，并提供具体理由。

示例: I like advertisements about delicious food, especially tea milk. For example, the famous Michi Binchang ad is very popular and makes me want to try the product.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和不自然的表达。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: Although I like some advertisements, I usually don't pay attention to them when using my phone or computer because I am working and don't want to waste time.

× although there are many advertisement in these days and even when I was a child

✓ although there are many advertisements these days and even when I was a child

advertisement是可数名词，表示广告，复数形式应为advertisements。这里表示多个广告，需用复数形式。

× but there's only one ad that made me very alike and can't forgot it

✓ but there's only one ad that impressed me deeply and I can't forget it

句子结构混乱，'made me very alike'不合适，应表达广告给我留下深刻印象，且can't forgot应为can't forget，动词忘记用原形。

× Forget it.

✓ I can't forget it.

单独使用Forget it不完整，且时态不对，应使用现在完成时表达记忆持续。

× there are many kinds of advertisement on it

✓ there are many kinds of advertisements on it

advertisement为可数名词，复数形式advertisements，表示多种广告。

× When I was on in the high speed train, there are two kinds of ad 1 is about the moon cake and the other is the.

✓ When I was on the high-speed train, there were two kinds of ads: one was about mooncakes and the other was something else.

句子结构不完整，时态应为过去时，ad应为ads复数，moon cake应为mooncakes，且句尾不完整需补充。

× something advertisement about the delicious food such as the snakes and maybe the moon cakes

✓ some advertisements about delicious food such as snakes and maybe mooncakes

advertisement应为复数advertisements，snakes和moon cakes应去掉定冠词the，且moon cakes合成词为mooncakes。

× I really love this advertisement. They have the, uh, canteen jungle.

✓ I really love this advertisement. It has, uh, a canteen jungle.

advertisement单数，后面用it代替，且canteen jungle前应加不定冠词a。

× although there are many kinds of ad in our society, but, uh, as you know, I'm a big fan of the delicious food.

✓ although there are many kinds of ads in our society, as you know, I'm a big fan of delicious food.

句中although和but不能同时使用，且ad应为ads复数，delicious food前不加定冠词the。

× So I very loved advertisement about the tea milk.

✓ So I really love advertisements about tea milk.

时态应为现在时，表达现在喜欢，very loved不合适，改为really love，advertisement应为复数advertisements。

× I really like tea milk advertisement.

✓ I really like tea milk advertisements.

advertisement为可数名词，复数形式advertisements更合适，表示多种广告。

× A famous ad about this is Michi Binchang, and I strongly believe you have heard about that.

✓ A famous ad about this is Michi Binchang, and I strongly believe you have heard of it.

动词短语应为hear of sth，不能用hear about。

× when I was streaming my phone or my computer, I don't like to look the advertisement.

✓ when I am using my phone or my computer, I don't like to look at advertisements.

streaming用法不当，应为using，时态应为现在时，look后应加介词at，advertisement应为复数advertisements。

× I don't like to look the advertisement.

✓ I don't like to look at the advertisement.

动词look后需加介词at，表示观看。

× It's very waste of time to me.

✓ It's a very waste of time to me.

waste of time前应加不定冠词a。