广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为完整，但语言稍显冗长且有口语填充词“uh”，建议减少口语化表达，句子结构更简洁自然。

示例: Yes, I remember a colorful poster of a cute toy outside a shopping mall that caught my eye. My mom bought it for my birthday, which made me very happy.

建议: 存在语法错误（sees应为see），表达重复且不够自然，建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达。

示例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on buses and subways. Most of them promote different products.

建议: 存在语法错误和重复（an creative, pro to promote），表达不够流畅，建议注意语法准确性和用词恰当。

示例: Yes, I like advertisements because they effectively promote products and share important information. For example, posters about environmental protection can raise people's awareness.

建议: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且缺少适当连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: I like newspaper advertisements because they provide valuable information about current affairs. In addition, I enjoy creative posters about environmental protection that encourage people to care for nature.

建议: 回答不完整且有语法错误（advertisement应为advertisements，useful usefulness重复），句子未结束，建议注意语法和完整表达。

示例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on my phone promoting products. I think they effectively show the usefulness of these products and do not annoy me.

× I always sees a wide variety of advertisements in the buses and the subways.

✓ I always see a wide variety of advertisements in the buses and the subways.

主语是第一人称单数“I”，谓语动词应使用原形“see”，而不是“sees”。“sees”是第三人称单数形式，和主语不一致，导致主谓不一致错误。

× I like newspaper advertisement which provides people some valuable information about current affairs and in addition I also like some creative and well made posts about Environmental Protection which can encourage people to protect nature.

✓ I like newspaper advertisements which provide people with some valuable information about current affairs, and in addition, I also like some creative and well-made posts about Environmental Protection which can encourage people to protect nature.

“newspaper advertisement”应为复数形式“newspaper advertisements”，因为指的是一般性的报纸广告。动词“provides”应改为“provide”，与复数主语一致。短语“provide people some valuable information”应改为“provide people with some valuable information”，介词“with”是固定搭配。形容词“well made”应加连字符，变为“well-made”，表示复合形容词。

× I usually see many advertisement on my phone for promoting products.

✓ I usually see many advertisements on my phone for promoting products.

“many”修饰可数名词，应使用复数形式“advertisements”，而不是单数“advertisement”。

× Yes, I like advertisements because they are an creative and effective way to pro to promote products and share very valuable information.

✓ Yes, I like advertisements because they are a creative and effective way to promote products and share very valuable information.

“an”用于以元音音素开头的单词前，“creative”以辅音音素开头，应使用不定冠词“a”。“pro to promote”中“pro”是多余的，应删除。

× For example, some well made poster about Environmental Protection can avail to raise the awareness of people.

✓ For example, some well-made posters about Environmental Protection can help raise people's awareness.

“well made”应加连字符，变为“well-made”，表示复合形容词。名词“poster”应为复数“posters”，与“some”搭配。短语“can avail to raise”用法错误，应改为“can help raise”。“the awareness of people”表达不自然，改为“people's awareness”更地道。