广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ответ должен быть более связным и естественным. Следует использовать правильные времена и грамматические формы, а также избегать повторений. Например, можно начать с утверждения, затем объяснить, почему реклама запомнилась, используя связующие слова.

示例: Yes, I remember a BTS advertisement when I was nine years old. It impressed me because I wanted to buy the Samsung phone they promoted. The ad was very appealing and made me interested in the product.

建议: Ответ должен быть более точным и логичным. Следует использовать связующие слова для плавного перехода и уточнять детали, чтобы ответ был более информативным.

示例: No, I don't see many advertisements on trains or other transport. Usually, I notice advertisements related to businesses on TV or online, but not much on public transport.

建议: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Следует избегать повторений и использовать связующие слова для объяснения причины своего мнения.

示例: No, I don't like advertisements because they often appear when I watch TV or YouTube. They make me feel nervous and interrupt my viewing experience.

建议: Ответ должен быть более ясным и логичным. Следует использовать правильные слова и грамматические конструкции, а также объяснять свои предпочтения с конкретными примерами.

示例: I enjoy watching food advertisements because they make the food look delicious. For example, when I see ads about tasty meals, I feel hungry and want to try them.

× I wanna buy BTS phone Samsung and it's good.

✓ I want to buy the Samsung BTS phone because it's good.

The phrase 'wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech. Also, the word order is incorrect; 'Samsung BTS phone' is the correct order. Additionally, 'and it's good' is better expressed as 'because it's good' to show reason.

× I have never seen a lot of advertisements like transport or train.

✓ I have never seen a lot of advertisements on transport or trains.

The preposition 'like' is incorrect here; 'on' is the correct preposition to indicate where advertisements appear. Also, 'train' should be plural 'trains' to match 'a lot of advertisements'.

× I only watched advertisement on business.

✓ I only watched advertisements about business.

The word 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with 'only watched'. Also, 'on business' is better expressed as 'about business' to indicate the topic.

× No, I don't like because when I watch TV or YouTube. Advertisement Advertisement appear I hate advertisement.

✓ No, I don't like them because when I watch TV or YouTube, advertisements appear and I hate them.

The sentence lacks proper structure and connectors. 'I don't like because' is incomplete; it should be 'I don't like them because'. Also, 'Advertisement Advertisement appear' is incorrect; it should be 'advertisements appear'. Pronouns 'them' are needed to refer to advertisements.

× It's made me nervous.

✓ It makes me nervous.

The present tense is appropriate here because the feeling is general and ongoing. 'It's made me nervous' is past tense and does not fit the context.

× I enjoy watching food advertisement because when I watch food about agreement, I like watching and I always eat.

✓ I enjoy watching food advertisements because when I watch food-related programs, I like watching and I always eat.

The phrase 'food advertisement' should be plural 'food advertisements'. 'Food about agreement' is unclear and likely a misuse of preposition; 'food-related programs' is clearer. Also, 'I like watching and I always eat' is acceptable but could be clearer with conjunctions.