广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があり、より自然で効果的な英語表現に改善が必要です。例えば、主語と動詞の一致、冠詞の使い方、文の簡潔さに注意しましょう。

示例: When I was a child, I was impressed by Japanese beer advertisements. They made me want to try beer when I became an adult.

建议: 回答は内容が伝わりにくく、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。特に「taxes」は「taxis」の誤りと思われます。話の流れを整理し、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習をしましょう。

示例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and recently on taxis as well. However, I find the sound very noisy, so I usually turn the volume off.

建议: 回答は比較的明確ですが、「movie」という単語の使い方が不自然です。広告を指す場合は"advertisement"や"ad"を使い、より具体的に表現しましょう。

示例: It depends on the situation. I prefer watching well-made advertisements on TV programs rather than short ads on platforms like YouTube or social media.

建议: 内容が不明瞭で、語彙の誤用（"whale produced movies"は意味不明）や文法の誤りが多いです。具体的にどのような広告が好きかを明確にし、簡潔に話す練習をしましょう。

示例: I prefer high-quality advertisements on TV programs. Recently, many ads on social media like Instagram and YouTube seem cheap and poorly made, which annoys me.

× When I was a child, I liked to watch the advertisements about Japanese beer and it was a very impressive for me and I thought that I would like to drink a beer if I can be a adult in the near future.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to watch advertisements about Japanese beer and it was very impressive for me and I thought that I would like to drink beer if I can be an adult in the near future.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'advertisements' and 'beer' when speaking generally. Also, 'a very impressive' is incorrect because 'impressive' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify; it should be 'very impressive' without 'a'. Additionally, 'a adult' should be 'an adult' because 'adult' starts with a vowel sound.

× When I was a child, I liked to watch the advertisements about Japanese beer and it was a very impressive for me and I thought that I would like to drink a beer if I can be a adult in the near future.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to watch advertisements about Japanese beer and it was very impressive for me and I thought that I would like to drink beer if I could be an adult in the near future.

The phrase 'if I can be an adult' is incorrect because it refers to a hypothetical future condition in the past; the correct modal verb is 'could' to express this conditional mood.

× Yes, so many cases uh, I encountered a lot of advertising on trains and in recently the advertisements on the taxes, it has uh, widely spread it uh, in my country umm, I find that it is very noisy and I always turn the volume off.

✓ Yes, in many cases, I encountered a lot of advertising on trains and recently the advertisements on taxis have widely spread in my country. I find that it is very noisy and I always turn the volume off.

The phrase 'so many cases' should be 'in many cases' to correctly express frequency. 'In recently' is incorrect; 'recently' should stand alone as an adverb. 'Taxes' is a wrong word here; it should be 'taxis'. 'It has widely spread it' is incorrect; the correct form is 'have widely spread'. Also, unnecessary pronouns and filler words were removed for clarity.

× Yes, so many cases uh, I encountered a lot of advertising on trains and in recently the advertisements on the taxes, it has uh, widely spread it uh, in my country umm, I find that it is very noisy and I always turn the volume off.

✓ Yes, in many cases, I encountered a lot of advertising on trains and recently the advertisements on taxis have widely spread in my country. I find that it is very noisy and I always turn the volume off.

The definite article 'the' before 'advertisements' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Also, 'the taxes' is incorrect; it should be 'taxis' without 'the' unless referring to specific ones.

× I like to watch a well organized movie on the TV program instead.

✓ I like to watch a well-organized movie on TV programs instead.

The phrase 'on the TV program' is incorrect; it should be 'on TV programs' to indicate general TV shows. Also, 'well organized' should be hyphenated as 'well-organized' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.

× I like to watch a well organized movie on the TV program instead.

✓ I like to watch a well-organized movie on TV programs instead.

The definite article 'the' before 'TV program' is unnecessary when speaking generally about TV shows.

× I don't like to watch a short movie which I can see on the platforms like YouTube or other social media.

✓ I don't like to watch short movies which I can see on platforms like YouTube or other social media.

The definite article 'a' before 'short movie' is incorrect when speaking generally; plural 'short movies' is more appropriate. Also, 'the platforms' should be 'platforms' without 'the' when speaking generally.

× Uh, I prefer whale produced movies, uh, on TV program, umm, recently, uh, I encountered many advertisements, which is very cheap and poor, uh, made on the show on the social media like Instagram and YouTube.

✓ Uh, I prefer well-produced movies on TV programs. Recently, I encountered many advertisements which are very cheap and poorly made on shows on social media like Instagram and YouTube.

'Whale produced' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'well-produced'. 'TV program' should be plural 'TV programs' when speaking generally. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'advertisements'. 'Cheap and poor' should be 'cheap and poorly made' to correctly use the adverb modifying 'made'.

× Uh, I prefer whale produced movies, uh, on TV program, umm, recently, uh, I encountered many advertisements, which is very cheap and poor, uh, made on the show on the social media like Instagram and YouTube.

✓ Uh, I prefer well-produced movies on TV programs. Recently, I encountered many advertisements which are very cheap and poorly made on shows on social media like Instagram and YouTube.

The definite article 'the' before 'show' and 'social media' is unnecessary when speaking generally.