广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，缺乏具体细节。建议练习用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体的广告内容和印象。

示例: Yes, there was an advertisement that impressed me when I was a child. It was a public service announcement about protecting the environment. It made me realize the importance of taking care of nature for our society.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，未能直接回答问题。建议练习简洁明了地回答问题，并使用正确的语法。

示例: Yes, I often see advertisements on taxis and buses, but not many on trains in my city.

建议: 表达混乱，难以理解。建议练习用简单句表达喜欢或不喜欢广告的原因，并举例说明。

示例: I like some advertisements on the street because they help me find new products. However, I don't like the ads on TV because they are often too long and annoying.

建议: 回答不够清晰，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议练习用完整句子表达喜欢的广告类型及原因。

示例: I like advertisements about video games because they catch my interest. When the ads are interesting, they motivate me to try the games.

× Yes there is, and public survives.

✓ Yes, there is, and public service.

原句中“public survives”不符合语境，应该是“public service”（公共服务）。此外，缺少逗号，影响句子结构和理解。建议注意句子结构和标点使用。

× Edmonton made an impression on me when I was a child.

✓ An advertisement made an impression on me when I was a child.

原句中“Edmonton”不符合上下文，应该是指“广告”（advertisement）。建议根据上下文选择合适的词汇，保证句子通顺。

× He deterred me.

✓ It impressed me.

原句中“he deterred me”意思是“他使我气馁”，与上下文不符。应使用“It impressed me”（它给我留下了深刻印象）。建议注意动词的正确使用和语境匹配。

× I need to. Be a good for people, for their society.

✓ I need to be good to people and to their society.

原句断句错误，且“be a good for people”表达不完整，应为“be good to people”。建议注意句子连贯性和介词使用。

× Are you only see the other attachment on taxi?

✓ Do you only see other advertisements on taxis?

原句语法错误，“Are you only see”应为“Do you only see”，且“attachment”应为“advertisements”，复数形式。建议注意助动词和名词的正确使用。

× Brother, I don't say the. Advertising on trains.

✓ No, I don't see advertising on trains.

原句语序混乱且用词错误，应为“No, I don't see advertising on trains.”建议注意句子结构和否定表达。

× America seen the other head mentor on the street would be quote it can help Maine.

✓ I have seen other advertisements on the street that say they can help me.

原句语法混乱，“America seen”应为“I have seen”，“head mentor”应为“advertisements”，“would be quote”表达错误。建议注意时态和词汇选择。

× Find my request to evening.

✓ Find my request in the evening.

原句表达不清，“to evening”应为“in the evening”。建议注意介词的正确使用。

× But I don't like to saying that to say the other teising when I watched TV program.

✓ But I don't like to say that or other things when I watch TV programs.

原句语法错误，“to saying”应为“to say”，“teising”应为“things”，“watched”应为“watch”以保持时态一致。建议注意动词形式和拼写。

× And at the. Go to that item and about games be 'cause I eat makes me interest.

✓ I like advertisements about games because they make me interested.

原句断句错误且用词错误，“eat”应为“it”，“makes me interest”应为“makes me interested”。建议注意句子连贯性和形容词使用。

× Pick what is really interesting and it will give me the motivated to play it.

✓ They pick what is really interesting and it will motivate me to play it.

原句中“give me the motivated”错误，应为“motivate me”，且主语不明确。建议注意动词搭配和主语一致。