广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and coherent by using correct tenses and linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details logically. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors to improve clarity.

示例: Yes, when I was a child, I saw a cricket advertisement during the 2011 World Cup. It inspired me a lot, and as a result, I started playing cricket myself.

建议: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about where you see advertisements. Avoid unclear or incorrect words to make your answer more understandable.

示例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and at bus stations. Since I travel by bus to work every day, I notice a lot of ads there.

建议: Try to express your opinion clearly and avoid hesitation. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to explain why you like or dislike advertisements. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

示例: Yes, I like advertisements because they help me learn about new products. However, sometimes too many ads can be annoying.

建议: Make your answer more fluent by using complete sentences and correct grammar. Clearly state your preference and explain why you like that type of advertisement with specific reasons.

示例: I like all kinds of advertisements, but I especially enjoy sports advertisements because I love sports and find them very motivating.

× Yes. When I was in childhood and their time, I saw an advertisement of sports.

✓ Yes. When I was a child at that time, I saw a sports advertisement.

The phrase 'in childhood and their time' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'when I was a child at that time' to indicate the period in the past. Also, 'an advertisement of sports' should be 'a sports advertisement' for proper adjective use.

× That was a cricket news, cricket advertisement.

✓ That was cricket news, a cricket advertisement.

The word 'news' is uncountable and does not take an article 'a'. However, 'advertisement' is countable and requires the article 'a' before it.

× I was very inspired from them.

✓ I was very inspired by them.

The verb 'inspired' is followed by the preposition 'by' to indicate the source of inspiration, not 'from'.

× I see a lot of advertisement on train as well as on bus station.

✓ I see a lot of advertisements on trains as well as at bus stations.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when referring to many. Also, 'train' and 'bus station' should be plural and the prepositions corrected to 'on trains' and 'at bus stations' respectively.

× I saw most of advertisement on busts.

✓ I saw most of the advertisements on buses.

'Busts' is a misspelling of 'buses'. Also, 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' and 'most of' requires 'the' before it.

× Over stove be 'cause I usually go through versus at my work.

✓ Moreover, because I usually travel by bus to my work.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Over stove be' is incorrect and 'versus' is likely a mishearing of 'buses'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× Yes, I like a advertisement, but sometimes the uh the Lords of advertised annoying me.

✓ Yes, I like advertisements, but sometimes the ads are annoying me.

'A advertisement' is incorrect; it should be 'an advertisement' or 'advertisements' for general liking. 'Lords of advertised' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'ads' is a better term. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× What are usually advertised helped me in many suggestions as well as it look ready for chosen some products as well as.

✓ What is usually advertised helps me with many suggestions and it looks ready for choosing some products as well.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'What are usually advertised' should be 'What is usually advertised' (subject-verb agreement), 'helped me in many suggestions' should be 'helps me with many suggestions', and 'look ready for chosen' should be 'looks ready for choosing'. The sentence is corrected for grammar and clarity.

× All type of advertisement I'd like, but I usually.

✓ All types of advertisements I like, but usually,

'All type' should be plural 'All types' and 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when referring to multiple kinds.

× Like. Some sports advertisement be 'cause I love being a sportsman, I always are attractive attractive from a sports advertisement and other.

✓ I like some sports advertisements because I love being a sportsman; I am always attracted to sports advertisements and others.

'Be 'cause' should be 'because'. 'I always are attractive attractive from' is incorrect; it should be 'I am always attracted to'. 'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'. The sentence is corrected for grammar and clarity.