电脑— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
In what conditions would you use a computer?
考生
I would use a computer in many situations because computer it is such a efficient thing which helps me study, improving my productivity and sometimes I use it just to chill out, for example play a game after a long day.
考官
When was the first time you used a computer?
考生
First time I had tried a computer was in early childhood I guess, but it better to say it wasn't computer, it was a laptop. My father gave it to me and downloaded a game and my father and I played this game together.
考官
What would your life be like without a computer?
考生
I suppose that without a computer my life would be much more complicated because it is much harder to prepare for classes and studying without it. However, if I hadn't, a computer in my life would be also more interesting and I would go for a walk.
考官
In what conditions would it be difficult for you to use a computer?
考生
Nowadays it would be difficult for me to use a computer without the Internet connection because almost all the things I do in my computer requires it. For example, searching for materials for study, books, download games. It is impossible without the Internet.
评估
总分
Part 1
In what conditions would you use a computer?
分数: 70.0建议: Ваш адказ натуральны, але ёсць некаторыя памылкі ў граматыцы і лексіцы, напрыклад, "computer it is such a efficient thing" лепш сказаць "a computer is such an efficient tool". Таксама варта пазбягаць паўтораў і выкарыстоўваць злучальныя словы для лепшай лагічнай сувязі.
示例: I use a computer in various situations because it is an efficient tool that helps me study and improve my productivity. Additionally, I sometimes use it to relax, for example, by playing games after a long day.
When was the first time you used a computer?
分数: 65.0建议: Ваш адказ мае некаторыя граматычныя памылкі і не зусім лагічную структуру. Рэкамендуецца пачынаць з прамой адказы, выкарыстоўваць правільныя часавыя формы і злучальныя словы для лепшай сувязі.
示例: I first used a computer in my early childhood, although it was actually a laptop. My father gave it to me, downloaded a game, and we played it together.
What would your life be like without a computer?
分数: 60.0建议: У вашым адказе ёсць некаторыя граматычныя памылкі і неадпаведнасці ў часах. Таксама варта ўдакладніць і развіць думкі, выкарыстоўваючы злучальныя словы і канкрэтныя прыклады.
示例: I suppose that without a computer, my life would be much more complicated because preparing for classes and studying would be harder. However, it might also be more interesting since I would spend more time outdoors, like going for walks.
In what conditions would it be difficult for you to use a computer?
分数: 75.0建议: Ваш адказ зразумелы, але ёсць некаторыя граматычныя памылкі, напрыклад, "requires it" павінна быць "require it". Рэкамендуецца выкарыстоўваць злучальныя словы для лепшай лагічнай сувязі і ўдакладняць прыклады.
示例: Nowadays, it would be difficult for me to use a computer without an Internet connection because almost everything I do requires it. For example, I need the Internet to search for study materials, access books, and download games, so using a computer without it is almost impossible.
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