电脑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va takrorlanishlar mavjud. Ingliz tilida aniq va to'g'ri gapirish uchun, jumlalarni qisqa va to'g'ri tuzishga harakat qiling. Masalan, "I use a computer for my homework and job because I need it to complete my tasks. I also use it for my English course, especially for translation." kabi.

示例: I use a computer mainly for my homework and work tasks. Additionally, I use it to help me with my English course, especially when I need to translate difficult words.

建议: Javobingiz mavzuga to'g'ridan-to'g'ri javob bermaydi va grammatik xatolar ko'p. Savolga aniq javob berish uchun vaqtni ko'rsating va sabablarni qisqacha tushuntiring. Masalan, "The first time I used a computer was when I was a child, to help me with my studies." kabi.

示例: The first time I used a computer was when I was about ten years old. I used it to do my school homework and to learn new things.

建议: Javobingizda gaplar chalkash va takrorlanishlar bor. Ingliz tilida fikrlaringizni aniq va mantiqiy ifodalashga harakat qiling. Masalan, "Life without a computer would be difficult and boring because I use it for games, homework, and many tasks." kabi.

示例: Life without a computer would be difficult for me because I use it for playing games, doing homework, and many other activities. Without it, I would feel bored and less productive.

建议: Javobingiz aniq va mavzuga mos, lekin ba'zi grammatik xatolar va takrorlanishlar mavjud. Gaplarni yanada ravon va to'g'ri qilish uchun, masalan, "I find it difficult to use a computer when it is old or slow because programs take a long time to load. Also, if the keyboard or mouse is broken, it is hard to control the computer properly." kabi tuzishingiz mumkin.

示例: I find it difficult to use a computer when it is old or slow because it takes a long time to load programs. Also, if the keyboard or mouse is broken, it becomes very hard to control the computer properly.

× I use a computer when I do my homework and when I do my job because it needs for me to doing my homeworks of I do it.

✓ I use a computer when I do my homework and when I do my job because it needs me to do my homework when I use it.

The phrase 'needs for me to doing' is incorrect. After 'needs', the correct form is 'needs me to do' (infinitive), not 'needs for me to doing' (gerund). Also, 'homeworks' is incorrect as 'homework' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form.

× I use a computer when I do my homework and when I do my job because it needs for me to doing my homeworks of I do it.

✓ I use a computer when I do my homework and when I do my job because it needs me to do my homework when I use it.

The word 'homeworks' is incorrect because 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Use 'homework' without 's'.

× I have a English course and I need translator or like this and I use it when I do my homework.

✓ I have an English course and I need a translator or something like that, and I use it when I do my homework.

The phrase 'like this' is informal and unclear; 'something like that' is more appropriate. Also, 'a English' should be 'an English' because 'English' starts with a vowel sound. The article 'a' is missing before 'translator'.

× I use it always will be 'cause I need it.

✓ I have always used it because I need it.

The sentence mixes present and future tenses incorrectly. 'Will be' is unnecessary here. The correct past tense form is 'have always used' to indicate a continuous action from past to present.

× I said it before because I need A to do my jobs or my curse homework and then I need a translator to translate my reading books when the I don't understand it.

✓ I said it before because I need it to do my jobs or my course homework, and then I need a translator to translate my reading books when I don't understand them.

The phrase 'my curse homework' is a typo; it should be 'my course homework'. Also, 'reading books' is better as 'books I read' or 'my reading books'. 'The I don't understand it' is incorrect; it should be 'when I don't understand them' referring to books (plural).

× I said it before because I need A to do my jobs or my curse homework and then I need a translator to translate my reading books when the I don't understand it.

✓ I said it before because I need it to do my jobs or my course homework, and then I need a translator to translate my reading books when I don't understand them.

The pronoun 'it' should refer to 'translator' or 'computer', and 'them' should be used for plural 'books'. 'The I' is incorrect and should be 'I'.

× It's hard to do without a computer because I use it always and I needed and without a capital life is boring.

✓ It's hard to do without a computer because I always use it and I need it, and without a computer life is boring.

The phrase 'I use it always' should be 'I always use it' for correct adverb placement. 'I needed' is past tense and inconsistent; it should be 'I need'. 'Capital' is a typo for 'computer'.

× I play games this computer I do my homework and it needs to do my things and without it I. Board is life is boring.

✓ I play games on this computer, I do my homework, and it helps me do my tasks. Without it, I am bored; life is boring.

The sentence lacks prepositions like 'on' before 'this computer'. 'It needs to do my things' is incorrect; 'it helps me do my tasks' is better. 'I. Board' is a typo for 'I am bored'. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs correction.

× Computer. I find it difficult to use a computer when it's old or slow because it takes a long time to load programs and also is a keyboard or mouse is broken it becomes it becomes a very hard to control the computer properly.

✓ I find it difficult to use a computer when it's old or slow because it takes a long time to load programs, and also if the keyboard or mouse is broken, it becomes very hard to control the computer properly.

The sentence is fragmented and missing conjunctions like 'if'. 'Also is a keyboard or mouse is broken' is incorrect; it should be 'if the keyboard or mouse is broken'. Repetition of 'it becomes' is unnecessary.

× In such situations I get frost.

✓ In such situations, I get frustrated.

The word 'frost' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'frustrated' to express the feeling of annoyance or difficulty.