艺术— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and structured. Avoid starting with 'Yeah' and try to form a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Also, use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar, for example, 'I have liked drawing since childhood' instead of 'my childhood'.

示例: Yes, I have enjoyed drawing since I was a child. I attended an art school in my hometown, and now I work professionally in the art field.

建议: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then add specific details using linking words. Also, correct phrases like 'this love brings me' and improve sentence clarity.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy going to art galleries. I visit them about twice a month because I find it inspiring. Moreover, my parents have taken me to see art exhibitions since I was a child.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrases like 'not in the theory way'.

示例: Yes, I want to learn more about art, but I prefer practical learning rather than theory. That's why I am studying graphic design at university, aiming to become a designer and create digital art for various brands.

建议: Your answer has good content but needs grammatical corrections and smoother phrasing. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use correct verb forms. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

示例: Yes, I learned drawing when I was a child. My teacher in kindergarten noticed my talent and suggested to my mother that I should attend an art school, which I did.

× Yeah, I have liked drawing since my childhood.

✓ Yeah, I have liked drawing since my childhood.

The sentence uses present perfect tense correctly to express an action that started in the past and continues to the present. No correction needed.

× I went to art school in my town and today I work in art field.

✓ I went to art school in my town and today I work in the art field.

The phrase 'art field' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the particular field of art. Adding 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, I really like to go to gallery.

✓ Yes, I really like to go to the gallery.

The noun 'gallery' is countable and singular here, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× I do it twice a month and this love brings me.

✓ I go twice a month because I love it.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'This love brings me' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence clearly expresses the intended meaning.

× My parents since childhood we go to see arts.

✓ Since childhood, my parents and I have gone to see art.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and pronoun usage. 'We' should be included properly, and 'arts' should be 'art' as an uncountable noun here. The corrected sentence uses present perfect tense to indicate an action continuing from the past.

× Yes, but not in the theory way.

✓ Yes, but not in a theoretical way.

'Theory' is a noun; the adjective form 'theoretical' should be used to modify 'way'. Also, 'a' is needed before 'theoretical way'.

× I go to the university for the program of graphic design because I want to be a designer and do a digital arts for some brands.

✓ I go to the university for the graphic design program because I want to be a designer and create digital art for some brands.

'Program of graphic design' is better expressed as 'graphic design program'. 'Do a digital arts' is incorrect; 'create digital art' is the correct phrase. 'Digital art' is uncountable, so 'a' should be removed.

× Yes, I learned drawing when I were a kid.

✓ Yes, I learned drawing when I was a kid.

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'was' in past tense, not 'were'. 'Were' is used with plural subjects or in subjunctive mood.

× My talented was see by my teacher in kindergarten and uh, she suggested my mother to uh, brings me uh, to the School of Art.

✓ My talent was seen by my teacher in kindergarten, and she suggested to my mother that she bring me to the School of Art.

'Talented' is an adjective; the noun 'talent' should be used. 'Was see' is incorrect; the past participle 'seen' is needed. 'Suggested my mother to brings me' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'suggested to my mother that she bring me'. Also, 'School of Art' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun.

× And yes, I learned.

✓ And yes, I learned.

The sentence is grammatically correct and clear. No correction needed.