艺术— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is quite short and contains some unclear phrases like 'pin vitriens'. Try to give a clear and natural response with a topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'uh'.

示例: Yes, I enjoy drawing, although I'm not very skilled at it. I usually create simple paintings because I find detailed work challenging, but I like expressing my creativity through art.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to respond directly and clearly. Use linking words to explain your opinion and provide reasons or examples.

示例: I don't often go to art galleries, but if I have the chance to visit one, I enjoy looking at the artworks because it helps me appreciate different styles.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts.

示例: I'm not sure, but if I get the opportunity to learn more about art, I would like to do so gradually because it would allow me to understand various drawings and paintings from around the world.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains incorrect phrases like 'I was burning my in five years old'. Make sure to use correct grammar and clearly explain your experience.

示例: Yes, I learned drawing when I was a child. I started practicing when I was about five years old because I enjoyed it and thought it was a popular hobby among kids.

× I just, uh, pin vitriens a little.

✓ I just, uh, paint vitrines a little.

The word 'pin' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'paint' when referring to creating art. Also, 'vitriens' seems to be a misspelling of 'vitrines' (glass display cases). The preposition 'a little' is acceptable here to indicate a small amount of painting.

× An easier painting.

✓ An easier painting.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased to form a complete sentence, e.g., 'I do an easier painting.' However, since the instruction is to only correct grammar mistakes from the list, this fragment is noted but not corrected here.

× Not really, but if I have chance to gather, I also like to see the.

✓ Not really, but if I have a chance to go to the gallery, I also like to see it.

The phrase 'have chance to gather' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'have a chance to go to the gallery.' Also, 'see the' is incomplete; it should be 'see it' referring to the gallery or artworks. The preposition 'to' is needed before 'go to the gallery.'

× if I have chance to learn art, I will gradually to learn that because I want to see different and various drawing and paintings around the world.

✓ If I have a chance to learn art, I will gradually learn it because I want to see different and various drawings and paintings around the world.

The phrase 'have chance' should be 'have a chance' (quantifier error). The phrase 'will gradually to learn' is incorrect; 'to' should be removed after 'will gradually.' Also, 'drawing and paintings' should be pluralized consistently as 'drawings and paintings.'

× I was burning my in five years old and I think I want to draw in the future because I think it's very popular for us.

✓ I was drawing when I was five years old, and I think I want to draw in the future because I think it's very popular for us.

The phrase 'was burning my in five years old' is incorrect. It should be 'was drawing when I was five years old.' The verb 'was drawing' is past continuous to describe an action in the past. The phrase 'in five years old' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was five years old.'