艺术— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“drawings”应为“drawing”，“force”应为“thoughts”或“ideas”。建议注意单复数形式和词汇准确性，同时回答应更简洁自然。

示例: Yes, I love drawing because I am majoring in fashion design and engineering. Drawing helps me express my ideas clearly, and I find it very enjoyable.

建议: 回答中语法混乱，表达不清晰，且有多处错误。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，避免冗长和重复。

示例: I would love to visit art galleries, but my university is in a small city with very few galleries. Sometimes there are traveling exhibitions nearby, but I haven't had the chance to visit them yet.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“knows”应为“know”，“go aren't”表达不清晰。建议使用正确的语法和词汇，表达更准确自然。

示例: Of course, I know my drawing skills are not good enough yet. I want to learn more techniques to better express my design ideas, which will help my future career and studies.

建议: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，句子不连贯，表达不清楚。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，确保表达清晰连贯。

示例: When I was a kid, I took drawing classes in kindergarten for a few months before I stopped. I remember while other kids were exercising, I was painting, which I really enjoyed.

× Yeah, I think I do love drawings because my major is fashion design and engineering.

✓ Yeah, I think I do love drawing because my major is fashion design and engineering.

这里'drawings'应为不可数名词'drawing'，表示绘画这项活动。复数形式'drawings'通常指具体的画作，而此处表达的是对绘画的喜爱。

× Using drawing to show my force and ideas is such a fun thing to do.

✓ Using drawing to show my thoughts and ideas is such a fun thing to do.

'force'用词不当，应为表达思想的'thoughts'。这里是表达用绘画展示想法，'force'意思不符。

× I think I kind of person who would love art gallery, but the city where I go to the university is really small, so these are hardly any galleries how they're?

✓ I think I am the kind of person who would love art galleries, but the city where I go to university is really small, so there are hardly any galleries there.

缺少动词'am'，'kind of person'前应加be动词。'art gallery'应为复数'art galleries'，因为泛指多家画廊。'these are hardly any galleries how they're?'语序和用词错误，应改为'there are hardly any galleries there'。

× Sometimes I see the boards online saying there's travelling exhibition in nearby city, but in the end I never have to.

✓ Sometimes I see the boards online saying there's a travelling exhibition in a nearby city, but in the end I never go.

'travelling exhibition'前应加不定冠词'a'，'nearby city'前也应加冠词'a'。'never have to'用法错误，应为'never go'表示从未去过。

× Of course I knows my drawings go aren't good enough right now.

✓ Of course I know my drawings aren't good enough right now.

主语是'I'，动词应用原形'know'，而不是第三人称单数'knows'。

× I really wanna learn more technique to explain my design ideals better.

✓ I really wanna learn more techniques to explain my design ideas better.

'technique'应为复数形式'techniques'，表示多种技巧。'ideals'用词不当，应为'ideas'，表示设计理念。

× Is will really better for my future career and study?

✓ It will really be better for my future career and study.

句子缺少主语'It'，'Is will'结构错误，应为'It will be'。

× Uh, when I was a kid, I took place in classy at my kindergartens.

✓ Uh, when I was a kid, I took part in classes at my kindergarten.

'took place'用法错误，应为'took part'表示参加。'classy'拼写错误，应为'classes'。'kindergartens'复数不合适，通常指单一幼儿园。

× I only start with you for a few months before quitting.

✓ I only started with it for a few months before quitting.

时态应为过去式'started'。'with you'用词错误，应为'with it'指代绘画课程。

× And I remember it's really clearly while the other kids was doing exercise, I was painting.

✓ And I remember it really clearly while the other kids were doing exercises, I was painting.

'it's really clearly'应为'it really clearly'。'was'应改为'were'与复数主语'kids'一致。'exercise'应为复数'exercises'。

× While they were snapping, I was still learning to pay.

✓ While they were napping, I was still learning to paint.

'snapping'用词错误，应为'napping'表示小睡。'pay'拼写错误，应为'paint'。

× Threw me back.

✓ Throw me back.

'Threw me back'时态不对，且句子不完整。应为'Throw me back'表示回忆过去。