艺术— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, use more precise vocabulary to express your feelings about drawing.

示例: No, I don't enjoy drawing because I find it challenging and don't consider myself talented. Instead, I prefer to appreciate artwork created by others.

建议: Your answer shows good ideas but needs clearer structure and more accurate vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, check grammar and word choice to make your answer more natural.

示例: Yes, I enjoy visiting galleries, especially when I'm feeling down. The creative atmosphere and beautiful paintings lift my spirits and help me feel refreshed.

建议: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using more natural expressions and clearer sentence structure. Avoid informal phrases like 'not my cup of tea' in formal speaking tests and provide reasons with linking words.

示例: I don't plan to learn more about art because I feel my strengths lie in subjects like math and science, which are more relevant to my major.

建议: Your answer is quite short and contains some grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and provide supporting details with linking words.

示例: No, I didn't enjoy drawing as a child because I wasn't very skilled at it and often received low grades in art classes.

× I prefer to watch them rather than drawing.

✓ I prefer to watch them rather than draw.

After 'rather than', the base form of the verb should be used instead of the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'draw' is correct instead of 'drawing'.

× It produces joyful atmosphere and also I believe that they are really creative and I proud of their their drawing, paintings and the light and it recharges my batteries.

✓ It produces a joyful atmosphere and also I believe that they are really creative and I am proud of their drawings, paintings and the light, and it recharges my batteries.

The noun 'atmosphere' requires the indefinite article 'a' here. Also, 'I proud' is incorrect; it should be 'I am proud'. 'Drawing' should be plural 'drawings' to match the context. Additionally, the sentence needed commas for clarity.

× I proud of their their drawing, paintings and the light and it recharges my batteries.

✓ I am proud of their drawings, paintings and the light, and it recharges my batteries.

The pronoun 'I' requires the verb 'am' to form the correct predicate 'I am proud'. Also, 'their their' is a repetition error; only one 'their' is needed.

× Since I don't have any talent about art, I it's not my cup of tea.

✓ Since I don't have any talent for art, it's not my cup of tea.

The correct preposition to use with 'talent' is 'for', not 'about'. Also, 'I it's' is incorrect; 'it's' alone suffices.

× Since I don't have any talent about art, I it's not my cup of tea.

✓ Since I don't have any talent for art, it's not my cup of tea.

The phrase 'I it's' is ungrammatical; the subject 'I' is unnecessary before 'it's'. The sentence should be restructured to remove this redundancy.

× I prefer to read math, science, and study in my major compared to attending art classes.

✓ I prefer to read math and science, and study my major subjects rather than attend art classes.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'my major'. Also, 'compared to' is better replaced with 'rather than' for preference comparison. The verb forms should be parallel.

× I always didn't give good grade.

✓ I always didn't get good grades.

The verb 'give' is incorrect here; the student is the receiver of grades, so 'get' is appropriate. Also, 'grade' should be plural 'grades' to indicate multiple instances. The adverb 'always' should precede the auxiliary verb 'didn't' for correct word order: 'I didn't always get good grades.' Alternatively, 'I always didn't get good grades' is awkward; better is 'I didn't always get good grades.'

× I always didn't give good grade.

✓ I didn't always get good grades.

The placement of 'always' should be after 'didn't' to form 'didn't always'. Also, 'give' is incorrect; the student receives grades, so 'get' is correct. 'Grade' should be plural 'grades'.