艺术— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid repeating words and try to form complete sentences that directly answer the question. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about why you like drawing.

示例: Yes, I like drawing very much. When I was a child, I learned how to draw, and it helped me express my feelings. I want to improve my skills because drawing allows me to be creative and relax.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to avoid repetition and finish your sentences. Use linking words to explain why you like going to galleries and give specific reasons or examples.

示例: Yes, I enjoy going to galleries because it is a great way to relax and learn about different artworks. Moreover, visiting galleries inspires me and helps me appreciate art more deeply.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and a bit unclear. Try to complete your sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and provide specific reasons why you want to learn more about art.

示例: Yes, I really want to learn more about art because it broadens my perspective and helps me understand different cultures. Additionally, studying art improves my creativity and mental skills.

建议: Your answer has repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to speak clearly and provide full information. Use linking words to organize your answer and give specific details about your experience with drawing and exhibitions.

示例: Yes, I learned drawing when I was a kid. In fact, I even had a solo exhibition in my country where I displayed a picture of a dolphin. It was a very proud moment for me.

× When I was a child a child I I learned drawing.

✓ When I was a child, I learned drawing.

The phrase 'a child a child' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'a child'. Also, the repeated 'I I' is a redundancy and should be corrected to a single 'I'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I I feel what I want to drawing and I want to learn more about.

✓ I feel what I want to draw and I want to learn more about it.

The verb 'want to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'want to drawing' is incorrect and should be 'want to draw'. Also, the sentence is incomplete without an object after 'learn more about', so adding 'it' clarifies the meaning.

× It is and it is important for me and very interesting way to spend a good time and from gallery I, I.

✓ It is important for me and a very interesting way to spend a good time. I enjoy going to the gallery.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Combining ideas into coherent sentences and adding missing articles ('a') improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It is interesting for me because art is a way to make your vision and mental more wide and.

✓ It is interesting to me because art is a way to make your vision and mind wider.

The phrase 'interesting for me' is better expressed as 'interesting to me'. Also, 'mental more wide' is incorrect; the adjective 'wide' should be used in comparative form 'wider' and 'mental' should be replaced with 'mind' for correct meaning.

× When I was a kid I learned drawing and I had exhibition, exhibition, solo exhibition in my country and I have one picture with dolphin and it was very, very.

✓ When I was a kid, I learned drawing and had a solo exhibition in my country. I have one picture with a dolphin, and it was very special.

The sentence has repetition ('exhibition, exhibition') and missing articles ('a solo exhibition', 'a dolphin'). Also, the phrase 'it was very, very' is incomplete and needs a descriptive adjective to complete the thought. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.