艺术— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, avoid redundancy, and use correct tense. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words.

示例: Yes, I like drawing very much. When I was in school, I had a keen interest in it and created many beautiful drawings. Nowadays, I spend my leisure time making sketches, which helps me relax and improve my skills.

建议: Your answer is unclear and confusing due to incorrect word choice and sentence structure. Use the correct vocabulary (e.g., 'gallery' instead of 'library') and organize your ideas logically with linking words to explain your reasons.

示例: Yes, I like to go to art galleries because I enjoy seeing different types of sketches and drawings. Moreover, it gives me a chance to appreciate creativity and learn about the artists behind the works.

建议: Your answer is relevant but needs better sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about how learning more about art benefits you.

示例: Yes, I want to learn more about art because it can enhance my creativity and improve my skills. Additionally, gaining more knowledge about artwork is very useful for my personal development.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use simple and correct sentences to describe your experience clearly, and avoid irrelevant or confusing words.

示例: Yes, I learned drawing when I was a kid. It was a subject at my school, and my art teacher was very creative. He taught us many skills related to drawing, which helped me a lot.

× When I was in my school that time I have been I had keen interest in drawing and I made a lot of drawings which looks very beautiful.

✓ When I was in school at that time, I had a keen interest in drawing and I made a lot of drawings which looked very beautiful.

The sentence mixes present perfect ('have been') and past tense incorrectly. Since the time referred to is in the past ('when I was in school'), past tense should be used consistently. Also, 'looks' should be 'looked' to agree with the past tense context.

× And nowadays in my laser time, I also made sketches and drawings.

✓ And nowadays in my leisure time, I also make sketches and drawings.

The word 'laser' is a typo and should be 'leisure'. Also, 'made' is past tense, but 'nowadays' indicates present habitual action, so present tense 'make' is appropriate.

× Yes, I like to go to a library we 'cause there is I I like to see different type of sketches, drawings and other type of monuments are there is a chance to? To see the different type of creativity and know about the creative person.

✓ Yes, I like to go to a library because there I like to see different types of sketches, drawings, and other types of monuments. There is a chance to see different kinds of creativity and learn about creative people.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrasing. 'We 'cause' should be 'because'. 'Different type' should be plural 'different types'. 'Are there is a chance to?' is incorrect and rephrased for clarity. Also, 'creative person' should be plural 'creative people' to match context.

× So that is why I like to go library.

✓ So that is why I like to go to the library.

The preposition 'to' is missing before 'library'. Also, 'library' should have the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× Yes, I like to know more about the artwork and that that enhance my creativity and my skills are about art and that is very useful for me if I learn more about.

✓ Yes, I like to know more about artwork because that enhances my creativity and my skills in art, and that is very useful for me if I learn more about it.

The sentence has pronoun errors: 'that that' is repetitive; 'enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with singular subject; 'my skills are about art' is awkward and corrected to 'my skills in art'; 'if I learn more about' is incomplete and corrected to 'if I learn more about it'.

× Yes, when I was get that time I learn about the art and there was a subjective of drawing in my school and my art teacher is very creative and there he had a load of skills about auto and IE total sand.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I learned about art and there was a subject of drawing in my school. My art teacher was very creative and he had a lot of skills about art and its total stand.

'When I was get' is incorrect; corrected to 'when I was a kid'. 'Learn' should be past tense 'learned' to match past time. 'Subjective' should be 'subject'. 'Is' changed to 'was' to maintain past tense. 'Load' corrected to 'lot'. The phrase 'auto and IE total sand' is unclear but assumed to be 'art and its total stand' for correction.