老师— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

示例: Yes, I do. During my postgraduate studies, I was fortunate to work with a retired principal who gave me valuable advice.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复，并且注意句子完整性。

示例: No, I'm not. When I graduated from primary school, I didn't have my teacher's phone number, so we lost contact.

建议: 回答内容较好，结构清晰，表达较自然。但可以增加更多具体细节和连接词，使表达更连贯丰富。

示例: During my postgraduate studies, I often struggled with choosing the right research topic. However, my favorite teacher always encouraged me and gave me valuable advice, which helped me stay positive and improve my work significantly. Thanks to his support, I gained more confidence in my research and was able to complete my thesis successfully.

建议: 回答内容丰富且表达自然，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时尝试使用更丰富的词汇。

示例: Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future. Currently, I conduct research in philosophy, and I enjoy helping young students with their research projects. Therefore, I believe teaching would allow me to share my knowledge and inspire others to think critically and practically.

× Of course, yes, during my post graduate I had I was more lucky to have an opportunity to worked with a retired principal who I who gave me more valuable advice.

✓ Of course, yes, during my postgraduate studies I was lucky to have an opportunity to work with a retired principal who gave me valuable advice.

句中“had I was more lucky”结构混乱，应简化为“I was lucky”；“worked”应为动词原形“work”，因为前面有“to”不定式。整体时态应为过去时，表达过去经历。

× No, I don't. When I graduate from my primary school I don't have the phone number of my teacher so we lost contact contaction.

✓ No, I don't. When I graduated from primary school, I didn't have my teacher's phone number, so we lost contact.

“graduate”应为过去式“graduated”，因为描述过去事件；“don't have”应为过去式“didn't have”；“contaction”是拼写错误，应为“contact”。

× Of course, yes, during my post graduate I had I was more lucky to have an opportunity to worked with a retired principal who I who gave me more valuable advice.

✓ Of course, yes, during my postgraduate studies I was lucky to have an opportunity to work with a retired principal who gave me valuable advice.

句中“who I who gave me”重复且多余，应删去多余的“who I”。

× No, I don't. When I graduate from my primary school I don't have the phone number of my teacher so we lost contact contaction.

✓ No, I don't. When I graduated from primary school, I didn't have my teacher's phone number, so we lost contact.

“graduate from my primary school”中“my”可省略，通常说“graduate from primary school”；“phone number of my teacher”应改为“my teacher's phone number”，更自然。

× No, I don't. When I graduate from my primary school I don't have the phone number of my teacher so we lost contact contaction.

✓ No, I don't. When I graduated from primary school, I didn't have my teacher's phone number, so we lost contact.

“I don't”回答“Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?”时，应该用“I am not”或“I am not in touch”，因为“don't”后面缺少动词，句子不完整。