老师— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In your answer, try to correct small grammar mistakes and make your sentences more natural. For example, say "He was my chemistry teacher" instead of "His was my chemistry teacher" and use plural form "concepts". Also, avoid starting with "Guess"; instead, start directly with your answer to sound more confident.

示例: I have a favourite teacher from high school. He was my chemistry teacher for three years, and I really appreciated his teaching style because he explained difficult concepts clearly and made the lessons interesting. Moreover, his method helped me understand the subject better and boosted my confidence in chemistry.

建议: Please pay attention to subject-verb agreement and singular/plural forms. For example, "teachers" should be singular if you mean one teacher, and "He's is" should be "He is". Also, use linking words like "because" to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I am still in touch with my high school chemistry teacher because I often contact him for guidance regarding my work, studies, and sometimes even my personal life. He is very supportive and helps me in difficult situations.

建议: Improve your verb forms and plural usage, such as "help" to "helps" and "master degrees" to "master's degree". Also, use linking words like "for example" correctly to make your answer more coherent.

示例: My favorite teacher usually helps me by encouraging me to try things I feel hesitant about. For example, when I wanted to pursue my master's degree, I asked him for advice on which subject to choose and which country would be best for my studies. He gave me helpful advice and insightful suggestions.

建议: Avoid repeating phrases like "in the future" twice. Also, correct plural forms such as "teachers" to "a teacher". Try to make your sentences more concise and natural by removing unnecessary words.

示例: Honestly, I am considering becoming a teacher because I want to see if I enjoy the profession. I plan to teach for three or four years to gain valuable experience and understand whether it is truly rewarding for me. If I find it fulfilling, I would definitely continue for a longer time.

× His was my chemistry teacher for three years and I really appreciated his teaching style because he explained difficult concept clearly and made the lesson interesting.

✓ He was my chemistry teacher for three years and I really appreciated his teaching style because he explained difficult concepts clearly and made the lesson interesting.

The pronoun 'His' is incorrectly used instead of 'He' as the subject of the sentence. Also, 'concept' should be plural 'concepts' because it refers to multiple ideas. Use 'He' to refer to a male subject performing the action.

× His was my chemistry teacher for three years and I really appreciated his teaching style because he explained difficult concept clearly and made the lesson interesting.

✓ He was my chemistry teacher for three years and I really appreciated his teaching style because he explained difficult concepts clearly and made the lesson interesting.

The noun 'concept' should be plural 'concepts' because it refers to multiple ideas or topics explained by the teacher.

× Well, I am still in touch with my chemistry high school teachers since I usually contact him for seeking any guidance for my work or study and sometime even my personal life.

✓ Well, I am still in touch with my high school chemistry teacher since I usually contact him for guidance with my work or study and sometimes even my personal life.

The plural 'teachers' conflicts with the singular pronoun 'him'. It should be singular 'teacher' to match 'him'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× He's is very supportive and helping me in difficult situation.

✓ He is very supportive and helps me in difficult situations.

'He's is' is incorrect; it should be 'He is'. Also, 'helping' should be 'helps' to match the present simple tense. 'Situation' should be plural 'situations' to indicate more than one instance.

× My favorite teacher usually help me by encouraging me to try things that I feel hesitate about.

✓ My favorite teacher usually helps me by encouraging me to try things that I feel hesitant about.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the third person singular subject 'teacher'. Also, 'hesitate' is a verb; the adjective 'hesitant' is needed here to describe feelings.

× My favorite teacher usually help me by encouraging me to try things that I feel hesitate about.

✓ My favorite teacher usually helps me by encouraging me to try things that I feel hesitant about.

The word 'hesitate' is a verb, but an adjective 'hesitant' is needed to describe the feeling about trying things.

× when I wanted to pursue my master degrees, I asked him for advice on which subject to choose and which country would be best for my studies.

✓ when I wanted to pursue my master's degree, I asked him for advice on which subject to choose and which country would be best for my studies.

The phrase 'master degrees' should be singular possessive 'master's degree' as it refers to one degree program.

× In the future, honestly, I am considering becoming a teachers in the future because I want to see if I enjoy the profession.

✓ In the future, honestly, I am considering becoming a teacher because I want to see if I enjoy the profession.

The noun 'teachers' is plural but should be singular 'teacher' after 'becoming a' which requires singular noun.