老师— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more fluent and organised by avoiding fillers like 'uh' and 'you know'. Also, focus on relevant details about your teacher's qualities and how they impact you, rather than physical appearance. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, my favourite teacher is my English teacher from the Cambly platform. He is from the United States and is in his late seventies. He has a great sense of humour, which makes learning enjoyable and helps me understand difficult topics more easily.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more concise. Use linking words to connect reasons logically and avoid redundancy.

示例: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because after graduating from university, I moved away from my hometown. Moreover, I have been very busy with work, so I haven't had time to keep in contact.

建议: Avoid fillers and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of how the teacher helped you.

示例: My favourite teacher has a keen sense of humour, which helps him explain complicated topics in a simple way. As a result, learning becomes enjoyable, and I have gained a lot of knowledge from him.

建议: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid excessive hesitation. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically and provide a more confident conclusion.

示例: Actually, teaching is not my dream career because I believe a good teacher needs to be a good listener and communicator. However, I sometimes struggle to stay patient, so I don't think I would make a good teacher.

× I moved from away from my hometown

✓ I moved away from my hometown

The phrase 'moved from away from' is incorrect because 'from' is repeated unnecessarily. The correct preposition to indicate leaving a place is 'away from'. Therefore, 'moved away from my hometown' is the correct form.

× I haven't have any connection with my primary school teacher

✓ I haven't had any connection with my primary school teacher

The phrase 'haven't have' is incorrect because after 'haven't' (have not), the past participle form of the verb should be used. The correct form is 'haven't had' to indicate the present perfect tense.

× he has a ability to, you know, make a complicate

✓ he has an ability to, you know, make a complicated

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound, so 'a ability' should be 'an ability'. Also, 'complicate' is a verb, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'matters', so 'complicated' is correct.

× make a complicate. Complicated matters seem easy for me

✓ make complicated matters seem easy for me

The word 'complicate' is a verb, but an adjective 'complicated' is needed to describe 'matters'. Also, the period after 'complicate' is incorrect and should be removed.

× I think I have difficulty in, uh, stay patient

✓ I think I have difficulty in staying patient

After the phrase 'have difficulty in', the gerund form of the verb should be used. Therefore, 'stay' should be changed to 'staying'.