老师— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onekta confusing. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, jate answer ta natural lage. Apni jodi kichu specific example den, tahole answer aro bhalo hobe.

示例: Yes, I have a favorite teacher who taught me mathematics during my school life. He always encouraged me to get good scores in exams and motivated me to become a better person. Because of his support, I am successful now.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni linking words use korte paren jemon 'however' ba 'although' jate answer ta aro coherent hoy.

示例: Yes, I sometimes try to contact my primary school teachers through social media or phone. However, due to my busy schedule, I cannot do it often. But whenever I get free time, I visit my primary school to meet them.

建议: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'His supportive motivated me' er jaygay 'His support motivated me' hobe. Apni aro kichu specific example dite paren jate answer aro strong hoy.

示例: My favorite teacher helped me in many ways, especially by teaching me important skills like time management and discipline. For example, he showed me how to plan my study schedule effectively. His support motivated me to work harder and achieve my goals.

建议: Apnar answer clear, kintu apni aro kichu detail add korte paren jemon keno apni civil engineer hote chan. Ete answer ta aro interesting hobe.

示例: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I have a different goal. I want to be a civil engineer because I am interested in designing and building structures that help society.

× He always try to insure me to cut a goodie score in my exam and always become a great person in my life for him.

✓ He always tries to ensure that I get a good score in my exam and has always been a great person in my life for me.

The verb 'try' should be 'tries' to agree with the third person singular subject 'He'. Also, 'insure' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'ensure'. 'Cut a goodie score' is incorrect; it should be 'get a good score'. 'Become' should be 'has been' to correctly express the ongoing influence. 'For him' is incorrect; it should be 'for me'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and word choice errors.

× Yes, sometimes I try to contact with my primary teachers via social media or phone number but due to my busy schedules I cannot.

✓ Yes, sometimes I try to contact my primary teachers via social media or phone, but due to my busy schedule, I cannot.

The verb 'contact' does not require the preposition 'with'. 'Phone number' should be simplified to 'phone'. 'Busy schedules' should be singular 'busy schedule' to match the context. These changes correct preposition misuse and improve clarity.

× But when I get any free time, I went in my primary school and meet with them.

✓ But when I get any free time, I go to my primary school and meet with them.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Went' should be 'go' to match the present tense 'get'. 'In my primary school' should be 'to my primary school' to use the correct preposition. These corrections fix tense inconsistency and preposition error.

× His supportive motivated me to work harder and achieve my goals.

✓ His support motivated me to work harder and achieve my goals.

'Supportive' is an adjective and cannot be the subject here; the correct noun is 'support'. This correction fixes the incorrect use of word form (pronoun/adjective confusion).