老师— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 다소 중복되고 불필요한 표현이 포함되어 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 주제 문장을 명확히 제시하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: I don't have a favourite teacher from school, but I do have a favourite professor at university who inspires me a lot.

建议: 답변이 다소 불완전하며, 문법적 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 완성도 있게 만들고, 구체적인 이유를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher because my family moved to a different city shortly after I finished primary school.

建议: 답변이 비교적 자연스럽지만, 'umm' 같은 불필요한 말버릇을 줄이고, 구체적인 예시나 결과를 추가하면 더 효과적입니다.

示例: My favourite teacher was very caring and always encouraged me to stay focused on my studies, especially when I felt down, which helped me improve my grades.

建议: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 어색합니다. 명확한 주제 문장과 이유를 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: No, I don't want to be a teacher because I'm not interested in teaching or sharing knowledge with others.

× I'm currently pursuing my master's degree so.

✓ I'm currently pursuing my master's degree.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'so' which creates an incomplete sentence structure. Removing 'so' completes the sentence properly.

× I guess it would be more appropriate that I have a favorite professor, I guess.

✓ I guess it would be more appropriate to say that I have a favorite professor.

The original sentence is awkward and repetitive. Using 'to say that' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× I don't really stay in touch with my primary.

✓ I don't really stay in touch with my primary school teacher.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'my primary' which is incomplete. Adding 'school teacher' completes the thought clearly.

× she always encouraged me to umm, stay focused on my studying when I feel depressed.

✓ she always encouraged me to stay focused on my studies when I felt depressed.

The verb 'encouraged' is past tense, so the following verb phrase should be consistent. 'Stay focused on my studies' is correct, and 'studies' is the proper noun here. Also, 'when I felt depressed' matches past tense context.

× No, I don't really like.

✓ No, I don't really like it.

The sentence is incomplete; 'like' requires an object. Adding 'it' completes the sentence.

× I think being a teacher is not.

✓ I think being a teacher is not for me.

The sentence ends abruptly and is incomplete. Adding 'for me' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.