Part 1
考官
Do you have a favourite teacher?
考生
Yes, I have a favorite teacher called Michael. He is my English teacher and I really like him because he always encouraged me to speak English confidently. For example, he often gives me positive feedback and motivates me to improve my speaking skills.
考官
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
考生
No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher anymore. When I graduated I didn't have a phone to keep in contact so it was difficult to stay connected. Also, in Taiwanese culture is not very common to maintain regular contacts with teachers after finishing school.
考官
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
考生
My favorite teacher helps me gives more confidence by teaching me useful in practical speaking skills. For example, he always encouraged me to speak more in class, which made me feel more comfortable and improved my communication ability significantly.
考官
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
考生
Personally, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I feel that I lack the necessary skills and knowledge to teach efficiently. Moreover, I am quite introvert, so I think it would be challenging for me to handle classroom management and communicate confidently with many students.
× My favorite teacher helps me gives more confidence by teaching me useful in practical speaking skills.
✓ My favorite teacher helps me gain more confidence by teaching me useful practical speaking skills.
句子中 'helps me gives' 主谓不一致,应改为 'helps me gain',因为 'helps' 后面接动词原形。'useful in practical speaking skills' 结构不正确,应改为 'useful practical speaking skills'。
× He is my English teacher and I really like him because he always encouraged me to speak English confidently.
✓ He is my English teacher and I really like him because he always encourages me to speak English confidently.
句子中 'he always encouraged' 使用了过去时,但描述的是现在持续的情况,应使用一般现在时 'encourages'。
× Also, in Taiwanese culture is not very common to maintain regular contacts with teachers after finishing school.
✓ Also, in Taiwanese culture it is not very common to maintain regular contact with teachers after finishing school.
句子缺少主语 'it',且 'contacts' 应为不可数名词 'contact',表示保持联系。