老师— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为自然，但句子较长且有些冗余，建议简化表达，避免重复信息，并注意语法准确性。

示例: Yes, my favorite teacher is my high school physical education teacher. We still keep in touch and often have meals together. We also share funny videos on social media.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅，建议使用正确时态和更简洁的句子结构。

示例: No, I lost contact with my primary school teachers after I started middle school. However, I still keep in touch with my high school teacher and we often have meals together.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的时态和连接词，丰富细节，使表达更连贯。

示例: My favorite teacher helped me both academically and personally. For example, he taught me problem-solving skills and gave me advice on how to build good relationships with others.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，建议避免口头语，使用更准确的表达和丰富的词汇。

示例: Yes, I want to be a teacher because I enjoy sharing knowledge with students, which gives me a sense of achievement. I also believe teaching is a noble profession because it helps people learn new things.

× Yes, I have a favorite teacher, which is my physical teacher in my high school.

✓ Yes, I have a favorite teacher, who is my physical education teacher in my high school.

这里使用关系代词时，指人应使用"who"而不是"which"。"which"通常指物或动物。建议用"who"来指代人。

× No, I have not get in touch with them when I went to the middle school, but I still get in touch with my high school teacher and we often have a meal together.

✓ No, I have not gotten in touch with them since I went to middle school, but I still get in touch with my high school teacher and we often have a meal together.

"have not get"是不正确的完成时态结构，应该用"have not gotten"（美式英语）或"have not got"（英式英语）。另外，时间状语应使用"since"表示从过去某时起持续到现在。

× He not only taught me how to figure out the puzzles but also he can give me suggestions in my daily life such as how can I have a good relationship with other.

✓ He not only taught me how to figure out puzzles but also gave me suggestions in my daily life, such as how I can have a good relationship with others.

"not only... but also"结构中，两个部分的时态和语法结构应保持一致。这里第二部分应使用过去时"gave"。此外，"how can I have"的语序应改为陈述语序"how I can have"。"other"应为复数形式"others"。

× Yes, I think it's good choice to be a teacher because I can teach my knowledge to my student and that can give me a sense of my achievement.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good choice to be a teacher because I can teach my knowledge to my students and that can give me a sense of achievement.

"good choice"前应加不定冠词"a"。"student"应为复数形式"students"，因为通常指多个学生。"a sense of my achievement"中"my"不必要，通常说"a sense of achievement"。

× And I also think the teacher is, uh, noble role in the world because he can teach people they don't know.

✓ And I also think the teacher is a noble role in the world because he can teach people what they don't know.

"the teacher is noble role"缺少冠词，应为"a noble role"。"teach people they don't know"缺少关系代词或连接词，应为"teach people what they don't know"表示教人们他们不知道的东西。