老师— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is heartfelt but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and ensure sentences are grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I do have a favorite teacher named Ms. Goodling. She was very hardworking and kind-hearted. Whenever I had doubts, even in other subjects, she patiently helped me. Because of her support, I felt inspired to pursue interesting activities in my life. I will always remember the wonderful experiences I had with her.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and awkward phrases. Focus on giving a direct answer with clear supporting details. Use appropriate linking words and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

示例: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher, although she now lives in Canada. Whenever we have time, we like to talk and share experiences. She often motivates me to pursue higher education at a good university, which helps me develop my talents and skills.

建议: Your answer is vague and contains many hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear topic sentence and specific examples of how your teacher helped you. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words.

示例: My favorite teacher helped me in many ways. For example, when I struggled with math in eighth grade, she patiently explained the problems and taught me useful tricks to solve them. Even though she was also my English teacher, she always supported me in all subjects, which greatly improved my learning.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to organize your response logically.

示例: I do not want to become a teacher in the future because it requires a lot of effort and patience, which I find challenging. Teaching is a difficult job that only very talented people can perform well. Instead, my childhood dream is to become a successful businesswoman, and I am more interested in that field.

× I vividly remember that when I study in EastEnders at a time my I have my favorite teacher, her name is Goodling.

✓ I vividly remember that when I was studying in EastEnders, I had my favorite teacher; her name was Goodling.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present tense 'study' and 'have' when referring to a past event. The past continuous 'was studying' and past simple 'had' are appropriate to describe past experiences.

× She's very hardworking and kind hearted person.

✓ She's a very hardworking and kind-hearted person.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before the singular noun 'person'. Also, 'kind hearted' should be hyphenated as 'kind-hearted' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.

× Whenever I have any type of doubt even in another subject, she really helped me a lot and she always support me and inspire me to do something interesting in my life.

✓ Whenever I had any type of doubt, even in another subject, she really helped me a lot and she always supported me and inspired me to do something interesting in my life.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have', 'support', 'inspire' with past tense 'helped'. To maintain consistency when talking about past events, all verbs should be in the past tense.

× she always support me and inspire me to do something interesting in my life.

✓ she always supports me and inspires me to do something interesting in my life.

The subject 'she' requires the verbs to be in third person singular form, which means adding 's' to 'support' and 'inspire'.

× Well, I have a wonderful experience with her that I never forget in my life.

✓ Well, I had a wonderful experience with her that I will never forget in my life.

The experience happened in the past, so 'had' is correct. 'Never forget' refers to a future or ongoing action, so 'will never forget' is appropriate.

× Uh, definitely, uh, now she had gone in Canada, but uh, whenever we got a time, we prefer to conversate with each others.

✓ Uh, definitely, uh, now she has gone to Canada, but whenever we get time, we prefer to converse with each other.

'Had gone' is past perfect and not suitable here; 'has gone' is present perfect to indicate a recent action. 'In Canada' should be 'to Canada' as the correct preposition for movement. 'Got a time' should be 'get time' for habitual action. 'Conversate' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'converse'. 'Each others' should be 'each other'.

× now she had gone in Canada

✓ now she has gone to Canada

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when indicating movement to a place; 'to' is the correct preposition.

× we prefer to conversate with each others.

✓ we prefer to converse with each other.

'Conversate' is not standard English; 'converse' is correct. 'Each others' is incorrect; the correct reciprocal pronoun is 'each other'.

× My teacher always share their experience in another country.

✓ My teacher always shares her experience in another country.

'Teacher' is singular, so the verb should be 'shares' and the pronoun 'her' to match singular feminine subject.

× Even she always MO motivated me that I should pursue my higher educations in some summary now university where I got a chance to express to show my talent efficiently and effectively and it also help to Polish my.

✓ She always motivated me that I should pursue my higher education at some university where I got a chance to express and show my talent efficiently and effectively, and it also helped to polish my skills.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'MO motivated' is unclear and likely a typo; 'higher educations' should be 'higher education' (uncountable); 'some summary now university' is unclear and corrected to 'some university'; 'help' should be 'helped' to match past tense; 'Polish my' is incomplete and corrected to 'polish my skills'.

× Well, accord, umm, well, in a various way, my favorite teacher helped me a lot.

✓ Well, actually, in various ways, my favorite teacher helped me a lot.

'Accord' is incorrect here; 'actually' fits better. 'In a various way' should be 'in various ways' to be grammatically correct.

× I vividly remember that when I was studying 8 standard at a time, umm, I have no, uh, really face a difficulty in a math.

✓ I vividly remember that when I was studying 8th standard, I really faced difficulty in math.

'Have no' is incorrect in past context; 'faced' is the correct past tense of 'face'. 'In a math' should be 'in math' without article.

× Even she taught us English.

✓ She also taught us English.

'Even' is incorrectly used here; 'also' is more appropriate to add information.

× Even she also suggested me a tricks there.

✓ She also suggested some tricks to me there.

'Suggested me' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'suggested something to me'. 'A tricks' is incorrect; 'some tricks' is correct.

× With the help, I can learn the.

✓ With her help, I was able to learn them.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'her' clarifies the help source, and 'was able to learn them' completes the thought.

× I don't want to become a teacher because it require a lot of efforts or patience and easily lose one of my weakness.

✓ I don't want to become a teacher because it requires a lot of effort and patience, and I easily lose my patience, which is one of my weaknesses.

'Require' should be 'requires' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Efforts' is usually uncountable as 'effort'. The phrase 'easily lose one of my weakness' is unclear; corrected to 'I easily lose my patience, which is one of my weaknesses' for clarity.

× Apart from it, it is really difficult jobs and the most person who are very talented they are able to perform it.

✓ Apart from that, it is really a difficult job, and only very talented people are able to perform it.

'Jobs' should be singular 'job' to match 'it'. 'The most person who are' is incorrect; corrected to 'only very talented people are'.

× However, it is one of my childhood dreams to become a successful businesswoman and I have not of interest in such a field, so I don't want to waste my time.

✓ However, it is one of my childhood dreams to become a successful businesswoman, and I have no interest in such a field, so I don't want to waste my time.

'Have not of interest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have no interest'.