钓鱼— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện bằng cách trả lời trực tiếp ngay từ câu đầu tiên và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: loại cá, hương vị hoặc tần suất ăn) để làm câu trả lời rõ ràng và đặc sắc hơn. Ngoài ra, dùng liên từ để nối ý mạch lạc hơn và giữ tối đa 4-5 câu.

示例: I don't usually choose fish as my main dish, but I love the fish soup my grandmother makes. The soup is made with fresh white fish and fragrant herbs, giving it a comforting, slightly sweet flavor. I usually have it with rice about once a month when our family gathers.

建议: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng nên tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý rõ ràng hơn: mở đầu trả lời có chủ đề, sau đó nêu lý do kèm ví dụ cụ thể (thời gian, địa điểm, trải nghiệm). Dùng liên từ để liên kết ý và giữ ngắn gọn tối đa 4 câu.

示例: Yes, I have visited a large seafood market near the harbor last year. While it offered very fresh fish at low prices, the strong smell and crowded stalls made it uncomfortable for me. For example, I once left early because the floor looked wet and untidy.

建议: Trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc; để tốt hơn, bổ sung một ví dụ cụ thể (khu vực, nghề nghiệp, số liệu hoặc so sánh) và dùng liên từ để nối các ý. Giữ 2–4 câu, tránh lặp từ như “people”.

示例: Fishing is more common in rural coastal and riverside areas than in large cities. For instance, in my hometown many families fish daily for both food and income, whereas urban residents rarely fish because they lack access to suitable water bodies.

× I'm not really a big fan of fish, but I don't dislike it either.

✓ I'm not really a big fan of fish, but I don't dislike it either.

No grammatical errors identified that match the provided Grammar_Problem_Type_List; sentence is correct.

× Actually, I really enjoy the fish soup my grandmother makes because it has a special homemade taste and reminds me of family meals.

✓ Actually, I really enjoy the fish soup my grandmother makes because it has a special homemade taste and reminds me of family meals.

No grammatical errors identified that match the provided Grammar_Problem_Type_List; sentence is correct.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I have.

Short answer is grammatically correct for the present perfect question 'Have you been to the fish market?'. No issues from the list.

× I've been to a seafood market, which can also be considered a fish market.

✓ I've been to a seafood market, which can also be considered a fish market.

Although the original sentence is acceptable, if any concern arises it is only stylistic. There is no structural error matching the provided list; keep as is.

× However, I'm not really fond of going there because the smell of fish is quite strong and to be honest, I sometimes feel that the place is not very hygienic.

✓ However, I'm not really fond of going there because the smell of fish is quite strong and, to be honest, I sometimes feel that the place is not very hygienic.

Add a comma after 'and' before the parenthetical phrase 'to be honest' for clarity and natural pause. This is punctuation/style rather than a core preposition error; sentence grammar otherwise fits the list constraints.

× I think fishing is mainly popular in rural areas rather than big cities.

✓ I think fishing is mainly more popular in rural areas than in big cities.

The original 'rather than' is acceptable, but to be clearer and align with comparative structure, use 'more popular in rural areas than in big cities'. This fixes comparative phrasing and makes the comparison explicit.

× In the countryside, many people go fishing as a hobby or even as a way to earn a living, while people in urban areas usually don't have many opportunities to do it.

✓ In the countryside, many people go fishing as a hobby or even as a way to earn a living, while people in urban areas usually don't have many opportunities to do so.

Change 'do it' to 'do so' for a more natural pronoun substitute referring to the activity; this is stylistic rather than a strict error from the provided list, but improves register and clarity.