网络— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较自然且内容丰富，但部分表达略显冗长且有语法小错误，如“the Internet connection was available occasionally”应为“the Internet connection was only occasionally available”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，同时注意语法准确性。

示例: I started using the Internet in junior high school. Back then, computers were large and the connection was often unstable, so I couldn't use it smoothly. Despite these issues, I enjoyed exploring new information online.

建议: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但“studying on the latest pharmaceutical technologies”表达不够地道，建议改为“studying the latest pharmaceutical technologies”。此外，可以适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: I go online every day because my work involves studying the latest pharmaceutical technologies. Therefore, I often read articles and search for papers online, which helps me stay informed and improve my professional skills.

建议: 回答较自然，但存在语法错误，如“accessing to the Internet”应为“accessing the Internet”。此外，口语中“uh”应避免。建议注意语法准确性，减少口头语，提升表达流畅度。

示例: I can't remember a specific time when I wasn't allowed to use the Internet because it's usually accessible on my smartphone. However, I know that during flights, using cell phones or accessing the Internet is prohibited due to lack of Wi-Fi.

建议: 回答内容具体，但时态使用不当，如“spent”应为“spend”，且“use computer”应为“use a computer”。建议注意时态和冠词的正确使用，提升语言准确性。

示例: Yes, I think I spend quite a lot of time online, especially during the day because I need to use a computer to complete my daily work tasks. After work, I often browse my phone, reading interesting articles or watching educational videos, which sometimes makes me tired.

建议: 回答内容丰富且结构合理，但“I have planned so many flowers and herbs”表达不够自然，建议改为“I have planted many flowers and herbs”。此外，可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Without the Internet, I would spend more time taking care of my balcony garden, where I have planted many flowers and herbs. In addition, listening to soft music while reading books helps me relax.

× Despite these limitations, I still use Internet to explore more.

✓ Despite these limitations, I still use the Internet to explore more.

在英语中，Internet 前通常需要加定冠词 the，因为 Internet 是特指的网络。缺少定冠词会导致表达不准确。

× I do know that during flights, uh, using the cell phones or accessing to the Internet are prohibited as there is no Wi-Fi connection.

✓ I do know that during flights, uh, using cell phones or accessing the Internet is prohibited as there is no Wi-Fi connection.

动词 access 后面不需要介词 to，直接加宾语即可。此外，cell phones 前不需要定冠词 the，因为这里泛指手机。

× using the cell phones or accessing to the Internet are prohibited as there is no Wi-Fi connection.

✓ using cell phones or accessing the Internet is prohibited as there is no Wi-Fi connection.

主语是两个动名词短语组成的并列结构，视为单一行为，谓语动词应使用单数形式 is。

× Yes, I think I spent quite a lot of time online, especially during the daytime, because I need to use computer to complete my daily work tasks.

✓ Yes, I think I spend quite a lot of time online, especially during the daytime, because I need to use a computer to complete my daily work tasks.

句子中描述的是现在的习惯行为，应该用一般现在时 spend 而非过去时 spent。此外，computer 前应加不定冠词 a，因为是泛指一台电脑。

× because I need to use computer to complete my daily work tasks.

✓ because I need to use a computer to complete my daily work tasks.

computer 是可数名词，单数形式前需要加不定冠词 a。

× After work, I may still browse my cell phone, reading interesting articles or watching educational videos.

✓ After work, I may still browse on my cell phone, reading interesting articles or watching educational videos.

browse 通常与介词 on 连用，表示在某设备或平台上浏览。缺少介词会导致表达不自然。