网络— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
When did you start using the internet?
考生
I started using the Internet when I was a child. I really enjoyed watching YouTube channels online, for example some cartoons, because that's entertaining.
考官
How often do you go online?
考生
Almost every day because I need to do some research on my homework and besides studying I will also relax myself by streaming animes online.
考官
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
考生
Yes, I remember the time I wasn't allowed to use the Internet because my parents thought that I was addicted to it and they forbid me to use the Internet so that I can quit that bad habit.
考官
Do you think you spend too much time online?
考生
Yes, I think I spend a considerable time using the Internet, but I think it's quite essential because it helps me a lot on my school assignments. Besides, I think it's a source of entertainment and that really makes me feel relaxing.
考官
What would you do without the internet?
考生
I would read novels because that enriches my knowledge and I am really interested in these books.
评估
总分
Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
分数: 75.0建议: 回答较为简单，缺少连接词使内容显得有些断裂。建议在回答中使用连接词如“because”或“for example”来使句子更连贯，同时可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。
示例: I started using the Internet when I was a child because it provided me with access to many entertaining YouTube channels, such as cartoons, which I really enjoyed watching.
How often do you go online?
分数: 80.0建议: 回答中使用了连接词，但表达稍显重复且语法不够自然。建议调整句子结构，使表达更流畅自然，同时避免重复表达。
示例: I go online almost every day because I need to research for my homework, and besides studying, I also relax by streaming anime online.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
分数: 78.0建议: 回答内容完整，但句子较长且有语法错误（如“forbid”应为“forbade”）。建议分句表达，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。
示例: Yes, I remember a time when my parents forbade me from using the Internet because they thought I was addicted. They wanted me to quit this bad habit.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
分数: 82.0建议: 回答较好，但重复使用“I think”显得冗余。建议使用更多连接词和替代表达，使句子更自然流畅。
示例: Yes, I spend a considerable amount of time online; however, it is essential because it helps me with my school assignments. Moreover, it serves as a source of entertainment, which helps me relax.
What would you do without the internet?
分数: 78.0建议: 回答简短且缺少连接词，建议增加句子长度并使用连接词来丰富内容，使表达更自然。
示例: If I didn't have the Internet, I would read novels because they enrich my knowledge, and I am really interested in these kinds of books.
语法
× ...they forbid me to use the Internet so that I can quit that bad habit.
✓ ...they forbade me to use the Internet so that I could quit that bad habit.
这里涉及到情态动词的时态问题。原句中使用了现在时态的 'forbid' 和 'can'，但描述的是过去发生的事情，应该使用过去时态 'forbade' 和 'could'。情态动词的时态要与句子时间保持一致。
× ...that really makes me feel relaxing.
✓ ...that really makes me feel relaxed.
这里 'relaxing' 是现在分词，表示使人放松的事物，作为形容词用时表示主动意义；而句子中想表达的是 '让我感到放松'，应该用过去分词 'relaxed'，表示被动或状态。
× ...it helps me a lot on my school assignments.
✓ ...it helps me a lot with my school assignments.
动词 'help' 后面搭配介词时，通常用 'help with' 表示帮助处理某事，'help on' 不常用且不正确。介词的正确使用能使表达更地道。
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