网络— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
When did you start using the internet?
考生
In my primary school, I had my first phone in my life. That times I learned how to use the Internet to search my question and find the answers.
考官
How often do you go online?
考生
As for me, I already go online because I, I think, uh, I, I think online is very useful tools for me. And if I have any questions, I can use online to find the answers. So, uh, every day I usually, uh, use, uh, use this toys, toys.
考官
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
考生
When was the student? My school did not allow student allow students to use food during class, so I couldn't access the Internet at that time. This rule would help to us focus on our studies without distraction.
考官
Do you think you spend too much time online?
考生
For in my opinion, I true, I, I actually spent too much time online, uh, because I think, uh, uh, online, I have many kind of, uh, informations are attracted me, attracted me and make me, uh, admit me, spend more.
考官
What would you do without the internet?
考生
As for me, I usually go out to, to some park, to a practice my, my body and, and I or I will read some books to, to, to, uh, some books to, to expand my horizons.
评估
总分
Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构不完整。建议注意时态和冠词的使用，简洁明了地表达时间和经历。
示例: I started using the internet when I was in primary school. At that time, I got my first phone and learned how to search for answers online.
How often do you go online?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答中重复和犹豫较多，表达不流畅。建议减少填充词，使用正确的单复数形式，并直接回答问题。
示例: I go online every day because I find it very useful. Whenever I have questions, I use the internet to find answers.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答内容与问题不符，且语法错误较多。建议准确理解问题，直接说明不能上网的时间和原因，句子要完整。
示例: Yes, I remember that during class, my school did not allow students to use the internet. This rule helped us focus on our studies without distractions.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
分数: 45.0建议: 回答中断断续续，表达不清晰，词汇使用错误。建议练习流利表达，使用正确的词汇和句型，清楚表达观点和原因。
示例: In my opinion, I do spend too much time online because there is a lot of interesting information that attracts me and makes me want to stay longer.
What would you do without the internet?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁表达活动内容，避免重复，使用正确的句子结构。
示例: If I didn't have the internet, I would go to the park to exercise or read books to expand my horizons.
语法
× That times I learned how to use the Internet to search my question and find the answers.
✓ Those times I learned how to use the Internet to search my questions and find the answers.
times 是复数形式，应该用 those 来指代复数时间点；question 应该用复数形式 questions，因为通常会有多个问题。
× I think online is very useful tools for me.
✓ I think online is a very useful tool for me.
tools 是复数，前面用的是单数 is，应该用单数 tool 来保持一致。
× I usually, uh, use, uh, use this toys, toys.
✓ I usually use these toys.
toys 是复数，应该用复数指示代词 these 而不是 this。
× My school did not allow student allow students to use food during class, so I couldn't access the Internet at that time.
✓ My school did not allow students to use food during class, so I couldn't access the Internet at that time.
student 应该用复数 students，因为指的是所有学生。
× This rule would help to us focus on our studies without distraction.
✓ This rule would help us focus on our studies without distraction.
help 后面不需要介词 to，直接加宾语。
× I have many kind of, uh, informations are attracted me, attracted me and make me, uh, admit me, spend more.
✓ I have many kinds of information that attract me and make me spend more time online.
kind 应该用复数 kinds；information 是不可数名词，不用复数形式 informations；attracted me 应该用 attract me，时态和语态错误；admit me 是错误表达，应去掉。
× I usually go out to, to some park, to a practice my, my body and, and I or I will read some books to, to, to, uh, some books to, to expand my horizons.
✓ I usually go out to some parks to practice my body, or I will read some books to expand my horizons.
park 应该用复数 parks；a practice 是错误表达，应该用动词 practice；重复的 some books 应该去掉。
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