网络— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but lacks grammatical accuracy and natural phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and articles, and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I started using the internet when I was a child, mainly for my studies."

示例: I started using the internet when I was a child, mainly for my studies.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct verb forms and avoid irrelevant questions. For example, "I usually go online in my free time, mostly to watch videos on Instagram."

示例: I usually go online in my free time, mostly to watch videos on Instagram.

建议: Good answer with clear structure and relevant details. To improve, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, such as "because" and "so." Also, correct minor grammar issues like "encouraged" instead of "encourage."

示例: I can't remember a specific time when I was not allowed to use the internet because during exams, I usually avoid it as I have a strict study schedule. Also, my parents encouraged me to focus on my books, so I naturally limit my internet use during those times.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct articles and verb forms, and avoid repetition. For example, "No, I don't spend too much time online because I am a student with a strict study schedule, and my parents always encourage me to focus on my studies rather than the internet."

示例: No, I don't spend too much time online because I am a student with a strict study schedule, and my parents always encourage me to focus on my studies rather than the internet.

建议: Your answer is good with relevant content and examples. To improve, correct minor errors like "rely" instead of "relay" and "contravention" which is incorrect here; use "time-consuming" instead. Also, use linking words like "because" and "for example" appropriately.

示例: If I did not have the internet, it would be very difficult to stay connected with my friends and family because most of our communication happens online. For example, I use social media and messaging every day to share updates and make plans. Without the internet, I would have to rely on phone calls or meeting people in person, which can be quite time-consuming.

× Oh, I started using Internet when I was child and at that time I use Internet for my study only.

✓ Oh, I started using the Internet when I was a child and at that time I used the Internet for my studies only.

The word 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' before it. 'Child' is a singular countable noun and needs the article 'a'. The verb tense should be past tense 'used' to match 'started'. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' to indicate multiple subjects or general study activities.

× Are your phone go online for just entertainment?

✓ Does your phone go online just for entertainment?

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Are' and 'your' with 'phone'. The correct auxiliary verb for singular 'phone' is 'Does'. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect; it should be a question with 'Does' at the start.

× When I was free I give more preference to watching videos on Instagram.

✓ When I am free, I give more preference to watching videos on Instagram.

The phrase 'When I was free' mixes past and present tenses. Since the action is habitual, present tense 'am' is appropriate. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause.

× If I do not have the Internet, I think it would be very difficult for me to stay connected with my friends and my family because most of our communication happens online.

✓ If I did not have the Internet, I think it would be very difficult for me to stay connected with my friends and my family because most of our communication happens online.

The sentence is a second conditional sentence talking about an unreal present situation, so the correct form is 'If I did not have' instead of 'do not have'.

× Without the Internet, I would have to relay on phone calls or meetings people in person, which can be in contravention time.

✓ Without the Internet, I would have to rely on phone calls or meeting people in person, which can be time-consuming.

The verb 'rely' is used instead of 'relay'. The preposition 'on' is correct after 'rely'. 'Meetings people' should be 'meeting people'. The phrase 'in contravention time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'time-consuming' to express that it takes a lot of time.