网络— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“the time I start using”应为“the time I started using”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和不必要的词汇，使表达更流畅自然。

示例: I started using the internet in my senior year of high school because my teacher asked me to search for some information online.

建议: 回答较长且有些冗余，表达不够简洁。建议直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子说明原因，避免重复表达。

示例: I go online almost every day because the internet is an important part of daily life and helps me relax.

建议: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，如“was wasn't”重复。建议使用简单清晰的句子，注意时态和语法的正确性。

示例: Yes, I remember during the final week in high school, my parents did not allow me to use the internet so I could focus on studying and get good grades.

建议: 表达不够自然，存在语法错误，如“addicted to be to Internet”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法准确。

示例: To be honest, I think I spend too much time online, and my parents often say I am addicted to the internet, which I agree with.

建议: 回答不连贯，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达自己的想法，并使用合适的词汇。

示例: Actually, I am not sure what I would do without the internet, but maybe I would go outside to play sports to distract myself.

× To be honest, the time I start using the Internet is not so early.

✓ To be honest, the time I started using the Internet was not so early.

这里描述的是过去的时间，应该使用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时态“start”，应改为过去时态“started”。

× I started using it from my senior Senior High School time because my teacher wanted me asked to search for some information about concerning about.

✓ I started using it during my senior high school time because my teacher wanted me to search for some information about it.

“from my senior Senior High School time”中的“from”用法不当，应该用“during”表示在某段时间内。句中“wanted me asked”结构错误，应为“wanted me to search”。“about concerning about”重复且不正确，应简化为“about it”。

× I usually go online almost every day, as in this digital age people can't live without Internet and they regard the online surfing as a method, as a direct way of relaxing themselves.

✓ I usually go online almost every day, as in this digital age people can't live without the Internet and they regard online surfing as a method, a direct way of relaxing themselves.

“without Internet”缺少定冠词，应该是“without the Internet”。“the online surfing”中“the”不必要，应去掉。

× Yes, I still clearly remember that in my high school life it is.

✓ Yes, I still clearly remember that in my high school life it was.

描述过去的事情，应该使用过去时态“was”，而不是现在时态“is”。

× It was the final week and I was wasn't allowed to use the Internet because my parents wanted me to study hard and got a high grade.

✓ It was the final week and I wasn't allowed to use the Internet because my parents wanted me to study hard and get a high grade.

“was wasn't”重复，应去掉“was”。“wanted me to study hard and got a high grade”中“got”应与“study”保持一致的动词不定式形式“get”。

× To be honest, I think I spend too much time online so my parents always regard me as addicted to be to Internet and I think it is true.

✓ To be honest, I think I spend too much time online so my parents always regard me as addicted to the Internet and I think it is true.

“addicted to be to Internet”结构错误，应为“addicted to the Internet”。缺少定冠词“the”。

× Actually I don't have any idea if I. Refused using the Internet.

✓ Actually, I don't have any idea if I refused to use the Internet.

句子断开不完整，应合并为一句。动词“refused”后应接不定式“to use”，而不是动名词“using”。

× Maybe I will go outside to do some sports to abstract the attention.

✓ Maybe I will go outside to do some sports to distract my attention.

“abstract the attention”用法错误，应为“distract my attention”，表示分散注意力。