网络— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は基本的な構造を満たしていますが、文法の誤り（例えば、"I started using Internet" は "I started using the Internet" が正しい）や、冗長な表現を避けるために簡潔にすることが望ましいです。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。

示例: I started using the Internet when I was in junior high school because my father gave me a new computer. Since then, I have used it almost every day to find new information about the world.

建议: 語順の誤り（"I every day go online" は "I go online every day" が正しい）や文法の誤りが見られます。また、同じ表現（"every day"）の繰り返しを避け、接続詞を使って文を自然につなげることが必要です。

示例: I go online every day because I need to talk to a person who lives in Australia to help him study English.

建议: 文法の誤り（"I weren't" は "I wasn't"、"prevented me using" は "prevented me from using"）を修正し、より具体的な理由や感情を加えると良いでしょう。

示例: Yes, I remember a time when I wasn't allowed to use the Internet in junior high school. My father prevented me from using it because I spent too much time online and neglected studying English and mathematics.

建议: 文法の誤り（"talk other people" は "talk to other people"、"difficult question" は "difficult questions"）を直し、接続詞を使って文を自然につなげることが必要です。

示例: Yes, I spend too much time on the Internet because I have to complete assignments online and talk to other people to solve difficult questions.

建议: 回答は基本的に良いですが、繰り返しを避け、より自然な表現にするために文を簡潔にまとめると良いでしょう。

示例: If I didn't have the Internet, I would use traditional methods to communicate, such as calling someone to share important information.

× I started using Internet when I was a junior high school student because my father gave me a new computer to use the Internet.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was a junior high school student because my father gave me a new computer to use the Internet.

'Internet' is a unique noun and requires the definite article 'the' before it in English.

× I use the Internet almost everyday in order to find new information about the world.

✓ I use the Internet almost every day in order to find new information about the world.

The phrase 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace'; the correct adverbial phrase here is 'every day' meaning 'each day'.

× I every day go online because I have to talk to the person who lives in Australia every day in order to support his studying English.

✓ I go online every day because I have to talk to the person who lives in Australia every day in order to support his studying English.

Adverbs of frequency like 'every day' usually come after the verb or at the end of the sentence, not before the verb.

× I have to talk to the person who lives in Australia every day in order to support his studying English.

✓ I have to talk to the person who lives in Australia every day in order to support his English studies.

The phrase 'his studying English' is incorrect; 'his English studies' is the proper noun phrase to express supporting someone's study of English.

× I can remember the time I weren't allowed to use Internet when I was a junior high school student.

✓ I can remember the time I wasn't allowed to use the Internet when I was a junior high school student.

The subject 'I' requires the singular verb form 'wasn't' instead of 'weren't'. Also, 'the Internet' needs the definite article.

× My father prevented me using the Internet because I use the Internet a lot and didn't study English and mathematics at all.

✓ My father prevented me from using the Internet because I used the Internet a lot and didn't study English and mathematics at all.

The verb 'prevent' is followed by 'from' plus the gerund form. Also, past tense 'used' matches the past context.

× My father prevented me using the Internet because I use the Internet a lot and didn't study English and mathematics at all.

✓ My father prevented me from using the Internet because I used the Internet a lot and didn't study English and mathematics at all.

The action happened in the past, so 'use' should be in past tense 'used' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes, I spend too much time on the Internet because I have to complete the assignment online and have to talk other people online in order to solve difficult question.

✓ Yes, I spend too much time on the Internet because I have to complete assignments online and have to talk to other people online in order to solve difficult questions.

'Talk' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'assignment' and 'question' should be plural to match the context.

× Yes, I spend too much time on the Internet because I have to complete the assignment online and have to talk other people online in order to solve difficult question.

✓ Yes, I spend too much time on the Internet because I have to complete the assignments online and have to talk to other people online in order to solve difficult questions.

When referring to multiple tasks or items, plural forms 'assignments' and 'questions' are appropriate.

× My father prevented me using the Internet because I use the Internet a lot and didn't study English and mathematics at all.

✓ My father prevented me from using the Internet because I used the Internet a lot and didn't study English and mathematics at all.

After 'prevent', the correct structure is 'prevent someone from doing something'.