网络— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and grammatical accuracy. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Use simple, correct sentences and avoid repetition.

示例: I started using the internet when I was a child. I mainly used it to research information for my homework and school projects.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Provide a direct answer about frequency, then add details using linking words. Keep sentences simple and coherent.

示例: I go online every day. I usually use my mobile phone, iPad, or laptop to access the internet for various activities.

建议: Your answer is somewhat understandable but grammatically incorrect. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain the reason or what you did instead, using linking words for coherence.

示例: Yes, when I was a child, my parents did not allow me to use the internet too much. Therefore, I spent more time doing housework and other activities.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but is unclear and incomplete. Provide a clear opinion, explain why, and mention what you do to manage it, using linking words.

示例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online, which makes me feel tired. Therefore, I set time restrictions on my mobile phone, especially for social media apps.

建议: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Give a clear response about what you would do without the internet, and explain why, using linking words to connect ideas.

示例: Without the internet, I would read books and prepare for exams using printed materials. However, it would be difficult to find different resources, so it might be quite boring.

× It is I remember when I was a child at the Internet was exists.

✓ I remember when I was a child, the Internet existed.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'is' and 'was exists' which is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'the Internet existed' to indicate past existence. 'There is/was' structure is not properly used here.

× I usually using I I used Internet in my childhood for the research some homework at when I was a.

✓ I usually used the Internet in my childhood for researching some homework when I was young.

The phrase 'I usually using' is incorrect; 'usually' should be followed by the base verb or past tense depending on context. Also, 'for the research some homework' is incorrect; it should be 'for researching some homework'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually online I use mobile phone, iPad and laptop for a using the Internet.

✓ I usually go online using my mobile phone, iPad, and laptop.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and verb usage. 'I usually online' is incomplete; it needs a verb like 'go'. 'For a using the Internet' is incorrect; it should be 'using' without 'a'.

× So I'm at 704th ported online an I.

✓ So, I am often online.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases like '704th ported online an I'. It is corrected to a clear, grammatically correct sentence that fits the context.

× When I was a child, my parents ever weren't allowed to too much use the Internet.

✓ When I was a child, my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet too much.

The original sentence misuses 'ever weren't allowed to' and word order is incorrect. The correct modal verb usage is 'didn't allow me to' followed by the base verb 'use'.

× For my a improvements, I did some housework.

✓ For my improvement, I did some housework.

The phrase 'For my a improvements' is incorrect; 'a' is unnecessary and 'improvements' should be singular 'improvement' to fit the context.

× Yes, I think an I'm not feel good about this point, so I use a time restrictions for my mobile phone, especially one or two social media apps is not quite good for us, so I.

✓ Yes, I think I don't feel good about this, so I use time restrictions on my mobile phone, especially because one or two social media apps are not quite good for us.

The original sentence has incorrect quantifiers like 'a time restrictions' (should be 'time restrictions' without 'a'), and subject-verb agreement errors like 'apps is' instead of 'apps are'. Also, 'I'm not feel good' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't feel good'.

× Oh, are you read a book and prep it taking exam without the Internet?

✓ Oh, would you read a book and prepare for the exam without the Internet?

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'are you read' and 'prep it taking exam'. The correct modal verb 'would' is used for hypothetical situations, and verbs should be in base form: 'read' and 'prepare'.

× But Ann is not quite easy to find difference resources.

✓ But it is not quite easy to find different resources.

'Ann' is likely a typo for 'and' or 'it'. 'Difference resources' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'different'. The sentence is corrected accordingly.

× Without Internet is can be boring.

✓ Without the Internet, it can be boring.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'is can be'. The correct modal verb usage is 'it can be'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'Internet'.