电子书— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more direct with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (singular/plural, articles), and avoid repetition. Use one linking phrase to add a specific reason or example. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

示例: I prefer e-books to paper books because they are more convenient to use. For example, on my iPad I can quickly look up unfamiliar terms and cross-reference other resources. This saves space and makes studying more efficient.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence about timing, then add specific details and a linking word. Use more natural phrasing instead of 'majorly' and avoid repeating the same idea.

示例: I usually read online in the evenings after work. Specifically, I spend my spare time researching politics or self-improvement articles, because that is when I can concentrate best.

建议: Good content and example — improve by making sentences more concise and fixing small grammar issues (e.g., use 'I will' or 'I would like to'). Use a linking phrase to connect the general reason and the example.

示例: Yes, I will read more online because almost any resource is available on the internet. For instance, living in Nigeria, I can study American politics in depth without traveling, simply by accessing online articles and lectures.

建议: Provide a clearer topic sentence and specific, correctly phrased examples. Correct grammar and awkward phrases ('a China just discovered') and limit to 2–3 sentences with linking words.

示例: I like to read a wide range of topics online because I enjoy learning new things. For example, I often read about medicine and politics, such as recent medical discoveries and international policy developments.

建议: Combine the fragmented sentences into one clear statement. Add a second supporting detail using a linking word and be specific about how online reading is convenient. Fix the sentence fragment.

示例: I find reading online more convenient than paper because I can quickly search for definitions and cross-reference sources. Moreover, digital books are lightweight and easier to organize, which saves time when studying.

× Using my iPad to study is comfortable.

✓ Using my iPad to study is comfortable.

No grammatical error identified under the given list; sentence is correct as written. Keep structure 'Using my iPad to study' as a gerund phrase functioning as subject complement.

× Electronic books gives me the access to cross reference other resources and look up text that needs clarification without having so many paper book on my reading text.

✓ Electronic books give me access to cross-reference other resources and look up text that needs clarification without having so many paper books in my reading materials.

Subject 'Electronic books' is plural so the verb must be plural: 'give' not 'gives' (subject-verb agreement). Also use 'access' without 'the' in this context, hyphenate 'cross-reference' as a verb, use plural 'paper books', and change 'on my reading text' to 'in my reading materials' for idiomatic correctness.

× I usually read online to look up new topics either relating to politics or personal improvement.

✓ I usually read online to look up new topics relating either to politics or to personal improvement.

Tense is acceptable but word order and prepositions can be improved: place 'either' before the two parallel elements and add 'to' before the second element to maintain parallel structure ('relating either to politics or to personal improvement'). This fits present habitual action (present simple).

× Majorly I do that during my spare time, that is, in the evening after work.

✓ Mainly I do that during my spare time, that is, in the evening after work.

'Majorly' is informal and uncommon in this context; 'mainly' is the correct adverb. Also adverb placement before the verb 'do' is acceptable. No tense change needed.

× Yes, I would read more online because one can basically get resources for any topic of interest online.

✓ Yes, I will read more online because one can basically get resources for any topic of interest online.

Question asked 'Will you read more online in the future?' so use future simple 'will' instead of conditional 'would' to directly answer. 'One can' is fine for general statements.

× For example, as I'm in Nigeria, I can study about American politics without even leaving my house because all information are already online.

✓ For example, as I'm in Nigeria, I can study American politics without even leaving my house because all the information is already online.

'Study about' is nonstandard; use 'study American politics' or 'study about American politics' but better to omit 'about'. 'Information' is an uncountable noun and takes singular verb 'is' not 'are'. Add 'the' before 'information' for specificity.

× I consider myself to be a diverse reader.

✓ I consider myself a diverse reader.

Use the simpler structure 'consider myself a ...' without 'to be'. Both are grammatical, but omitting 'to be' is more natural. This is stylistic rather than strict grammar, but fits the guideline to correct per list (category 13).

× I read anything as long as it's going to add to my knowledge most times.

✓ I read anything as long as it will add to my knowledge most of the time.

Use 'will' for future relevance: 'it will add' or keep present 'it adds'. Also 'most times' is better expressed as 'most of the time'. This corrects awkward structure and improves tense consistency.

× Current topics in medicines and politics for example a China just discovered.

✓ For example, current topics in medicine and politics, such as a discovery in China, interest me.

Original sentence is fragmentary and unclear. Recast as a full sentence with clear subject and verb. Use 'medicine' (uncountable) not 'medicines' in this context, and clarify 'a China just discovered' to 'a discovery in China'. This addresses sentence structure errors (fragment and unclear noun use).

× For me, I find reading online more convenient than reading hard copy books because.

✓ For me, I find reading online more convenient than reading hard-copy books because it makes cross-referencing easy and quick.

Original ends with a dangling 'because' producing a sentence fragment. Complete the clause by explaining the reason. Hyphenate 'hard-copy' when used as a compound adjective and use 'cross-referencing' or 'cross-referencing' as a noun phrase; keep tense consistent.

× Reading online makes cross referencing easy and quick.

✓ Reading online makes cross-referencing easy and quick.

Use hyphen in 'cross-referencing' when used as a compound noun or gerund to improve readability. The gerund form is correct; add hyphenation.