新闻— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific example. Use linking word to show reason (e.g., "because" or "so").

示例: Yes, I am interested in the news. I read online newspapers every day because I want to follow the current situation in my country, especially economic updates. For example, I check financial news to see how the stock market is performing.

建议: Answer the question directly about how you find news (methods), then add a brief supporting detail about why. Use correct tense and linking words (e.g., "when" and "because").

示例: I usually find news online through news websites and social media apps. I used to find news boring as a child, but now I follow specific reporters and outlets because their reporting makes stories more engaging.

建议: Avoid emotional language like "hate" and vague phrases. Give a polite, direct answer and a clear reason with one supporting detail. Keep it short and natural.

示例: No, I would not like to be a journalist. I prefer other careers because I am not comfortable with public criticism and the fast pace of reporting.

建议: Be specific about the source and give a brief, neutral description of the story. Avoid imprecise or sensitive phrasing; use accurate names and linking words to explain why it was interesting.

示例: Yes, I read the news online this morning on a major news site. The most interesting story was about the ongoing conflict in the Middle East because it affects regional stability and global politics.

建议: Answer directly and correct grammar. Use a linking word to explain frequency and context, and add one specific example of topics you discuss.

示例: Yes, we often talk about the news, especially when there is little personal news to share. For example, we discuss major topics like elections or economic changes and share our opinions.

× Yes, I have been reading newspaper online every day because I want to know about current current situation in my country and as a result I can know that the stocks.

✓ Yes, I have been reading newspapers online every day because I want to know about the current situation in my country, and as a result I can learn about the stock market.

The sentence uses 'reading newspaper' which should be plural 'reading newspapers' for habitual reading. 'Current current situation' repeats a word; use 'the current situation'. 'the stocks' is vague; 'the stock market' or 'stocks' is more natural. Also use 'learn about' instead of 'know that' for information acquisition. Improvements: use plural for general items, avoid repetition, use appropriate nouns and collocations.

× When I was a child I found it very boring, but when I grow up I feel that news is very interesting and maybe it depends on the reporters who speaks about.

✓ When I was a child I found it very boring, but as I grew up I felt that the news became very interesting and maybe it depended on the reporters who spoke about it.

Tense consistency: the sentence mixes past and present. The context describes change over time, so past tense is appropriate ('grew up', 'felt', 'became', 'depended', 'spoke'). Also 'news' usually takes 'the news' and 'reporters who spoke about it' requires the verb 'spoke' to match past tense and include the object 'it'. Suggestions: keep verbs in the same time frame and include necessary pronouns.

× When I was a child I found it very boring, but when I grow up I feel that news is very interesting and maybe it depends on the reporters who speaks about.

✓ When I was a child I found it very boring, but as I grew up I felt that the news became very interesting and maybe it depended on the reporters who spoke about it.

'Speaks' is third person singular present; in the corrected past context the verb should be 'spoke'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and match tense. Also 'news' usually takes the definite article 'the'.

× No and never. I hate reporters and journalists careers because I found that they were in post negative feedbacks. Uh.

✓ No, never. I would not like to be a journalist. I dislike reporters and journalism careers because I have found that they receive a lot of negative feedback.

Original uses awkward modal/negation 'No and never' and unclear phrasing 'they were in post negative feedbacks'. Use appropriate modal 'would not like' to express preference. 'Journalism careers' is better than 'journalists careers'. Use 'receive a lot of negative feedback' to express the idea. Suggestions: use standard modal constructions for preferences and correct noun phrases.

× Yes, I have read it online. Uh, the most interesting news was about the war between USA and Arab.

✓ Yes, I read it online. The most interesting story was about the war between the USA and Arab countries.

'I have read it online' is acceptable, but simple past 'I read it online' fits with 'this morning' reference. Use 'story' or 'news story' instead of 'news' for a single item. 'USA' usually preceded by 'the' and 'Arab' should be 'Arab countries' or a specific country. Suggestions: choose articles and noun forms that match specificity.

× Do you often talk with your friends about the news? Student: Yes, especially when we are not have much stories about ourselves to tell, so we talk about news instead and we.

✓ Yes, especially when we do not have many stories about ourselves to tell, so we talk about the news instead.

'Are not have' is incorrect; use 'do not have'. Use 'many' with countable 'stories' rather than 'much'. Include the definite article 'the news' for a topic. The original trails off with 'and we' which is incomplete; remove it. Suggestions: use correct auxiliary verbs for negatives, choose correct quantifiers, and finish sentences fully.